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06/30/2006 05:28:00 PM |
| I like the perspective on this one, and I like the girl in soft focus. What I didn't care for so much when I was voting, is that the title made me wonder what the brown stuff at the very front of the photo was... looks like something I don't even what to think about the horse eating (ok, maybe I have too fertile of an imagination). Also, the sky is sort of flat and dull in this shot - not that you can control the wheather Ü |
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06/23/2006 04:29:01 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is unique and somehow you made something not interesting, interesting so good job there. The composition really kicks butt, IMO.
However, since the masses didn't agree I must now find lots of faults with this. :P Ok, you already know about the sky/background so skipping that I think having the girl in focus would have really helped a lot. Also, catching the horse's mouth open would have helped hammer home that this horse is indeed eating! I don't know why but voters I'm learning are like little children who need to be handheld every step of the way. I think you did a great job of that with your Take Two entry.
So in summary, have a better sky/background, girl in focus and some eating action and I think your score would have improved by a good margin.
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06/19/2006 02:29:02 PM |
Hello from Álex, CTP MkII
First Impression: wonderful angle
Composition: very well balanced
Subject: good for the challenge
Technical: wonderful use of DOF, good focus, colors ok
Improvement: just the sky, a bit blowed out.
Summary: very nice idea and shot
Álex
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06/13/2006 11:30:38 PM |
| Great perspective! Good focus on the horsie, and effective crop(s). |
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06/13/2006 08:45:17 PM |
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06/13/2006 12:51:08 PM |
| Wow, what perspective! I dont think I've ever been this close to a horse's nose, lol. Great job! |
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06/13/2006 07:34:29 AM |
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06/12/2006 02:40:34 AM |
i would've liked to see the horse's entire face..
great idea, though. |
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06/10/2006 06:39:10 PM |
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06/10/2006 02:14:56 AM |
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06/09/2006 07:46:33 PM |
| Mostly horse and not much green. |
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06/09/2006 09:03:42 AM |
| Love this natural-looking photo. |
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06/09/2006 05:41:25 AM |
| Unusual perspective nicely done |
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06/09/2006 05:11:17 AM |
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06/08/2006 08:53:25 PM |
| A little to close for me... |
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06/08/2006 09:47:48 AM |
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06/07/2006 08:50:03 AM |
| great perspective and excellent shot |
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06/07/2006 12:27:35 AM |
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