I took almost 400 shots of the kids (Ian, my son and Brittany, a neighbor girl) playing in the sprinkler in our yard. Then the ice cream man came. I had 3 other shots I almost submitted before I changed my mind totally and chose one I hadn't really even paid attention to. Well here goes (crossing fingers)!
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I like the idea of this crop, but I'd like to see the other kid's eyes, too. Seeing the girl's forehead/hair wouldn't take away from the effect you're going for.
love the pic. Like the girl's reaction, and the fact that you only included the lower part of the boys head. Shows exactly what she is reacting to without any distractions. Great job. This is great composition