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Broken Formation
Broken Formation
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Challenge: Negative Space II (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Backyard
Date: Aug 17, 2003
Date Uploaded: Aug 17, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 26 out of 141
Avg (all users): 6.1268
Avg (commenters): 6.8462
Avg (participants): 6.1087
Avg (non-participants): 6.1600
Views since voting: 915
Votes: 142
Comments: 13
Favorites: 0


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08/24/2003 05:16:49 PM
poor guy on the right looks like he's tryin' to catch up. great great great shot for this challenge!
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08/23/2003 01:22:35 PM
Excellent use of negative space. I like the composition and the colors. I wish there was a bit more contrast to darken the birds a bit, but that doesn't detract from a solid 9.
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08/22/2003 10:13:26 PM
Well done but not in favor of the border. Beauiful capture and meets the challenge.
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08/19/2003 01:41:05 PM
very clean..
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08/19/2003 12:56:12 PM
Simple but very effective.
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08/19/2003 01:16:44 AM
Very nice. The border really pops the birds.
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08/18/2003 08:17:36 PM
Wonderful picture!! I've tried to get bird shots like this, but I always end up with wires or trees in the way....Great Job!!!! :)
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08/18/2003 03:19:43 PM
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08/18/2003 12:49:24 PM
Brilliant.

Perhaps the space at the top was kept intentionally but I would much prefer to have it some of it cropped off to bring more attention to the 'V-shape' form of the birds as I feel that the birds inthe middle of the image are the real subjects when I find the "V" is much more interesting.
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08/18/2003 09:16:10 AM
Border overpowers this delicate image. A very good composition with excellent focus given the capture. Fills the brief nicely too.
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08/18/2003 08:51:39 AM
Superb capture!
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08/18/2003 03:39:13 AM
I can't put my finger on it. I think maybe if the negative space was ahead of them, in the direction they are facing, that might work better. Nice catch though.
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08/18/2003 12:11:31 AM
Very nice. Definitely a great use of negative space. The blue of the sky is a little unappealing on my monitor - not quite sure why. Makes me want to see this in black and white and see if that would make it more dramatic.
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