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06/06/2006 02:12:56 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
AWESOME exposure. Love the vivrant blue sky, only wish I could see more of it.
Composition:
It's not bad, but I think a slight perspective change in post-process to straighten up the verticals could have strengthened it.
Subject:
Really can't miss it, it's right there in your face :-)
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
All exceptional!
To grow its vote?:
As you mentioned being able to clone out a few wires would have helped a lot. I think straightening the perspective would have helped a lot too.
Summary:
Great shot. I wish you had been able to process it, I really think you'd have a stunner. You should post-process it more when you get the time and post it for us to see.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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06/04/2006 11:20:00 PM |
| Nice blues! Given it's advanced editing, you may have wanted to clone out the wire at the top. |
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06/03/2006 09:15:42 PM |
| Good POV, this could be great with a little cloning of distracting wires and a bit more empty space at the top. |
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06/01/2006 06:17:01 AM |
| Love the color on this one. That blue is gorgeous around the door. Improvements would be to clone out the shadow on the lower right, and clone out the cord on the building and on the roofline. Just a suggestion, not marking down because of it. |
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05/31/2006 08:09:09 AM |
| I really like the color here- All I can think about is CW rotation, however. 6 |
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05/29/2006 12:50:47 PM |
| Nice colours. 'Alternative' angle aswell. |
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05/29/2006 08:32:47 AM |
| Personally I'd have used the advanced editing to get rid of the distracting shadow in the lower right, but otherwise very nicely done. |
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