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05/27/2006 08:20:36 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I don't like that Doc .. she got needles .. and i hate them ... great work
Composition:
This is quite well done .. she is not centered .. she looks comfortable .. she also looks like she knows what she is doing.
Subject:
Sort of meets the challenge ... although it does not contain what would be the environment .. by being stark it creates the impression.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good work here .. nice and crisp and works in black and white.
To grow its vote?:
I think it may be the lack of the environement that didn't help here ... but the shot is good .. don't give her a copy for her wall it will scare kids.
Summary:
Good work again ... interesting shot ...
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/27/2006 03:23:44 PM |
I would've given this a 10...but I fainted. ;-P
j/k - I missed voting the challenge, but this one stood out and I think it's an excellent image with a journalistic style to it. Well done. |
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05/21/2006 03:24:47 PM |
| Great eyes she has; difficult shot really - all that white is terribly difficult to control in exposure. Brings to mind that cold feeling of liquid being forced into one's veins: kind of exciting and fearful at the same time. |
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05/20/2006 12:07:01 AM |
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05/18/2006 01:03:14 PM |
| I think for this particular shot, I would have preferred a deeper DOF so that the hand and syringe were in focus as well. I hope that needle wasn't for you! |
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05/18/2006 11:00:08 AM |
| nice shot! would have been even better IMHO is the syringe was in focus! (7) |
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05/18/2006 07:56:23 AM |
| Would have been even better with a medical related background |
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05/17/2006 06:42:28 AM |
| I think this is a very good interpretation of the challenge. It's also a very nice shot. |
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05/17/2006 05:27:22 AM |
| Black and white suits here. Good lighting and crop. I like how it's not posy but it's not a candid either. |
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05/16/2006 06:05:13 PM |
| it might be nice to have the syringe in her hand in focus to , unless this was the look you were looking for, very sharp on her. |
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05/15/2006 08:56:06 PM |
| Strong light and wonderful sense of moment. |
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05/15/2006 09:33:44 AM |
| a bit over processed and the whites are blown out. nice effort though 6 |
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05/15/2006 05:46:05 AM |
| well done...great in b and w, suits the shot |
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05/15/2006 12:36:06 AM |
| Great shot. Love it. Perfect for the challenge. |
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