Challenge:Desolation (Classic Editing) Camera:Olympus C-720UZ Location: grandparents house Date: Aug 12, 2003 Aperture: f 3.4 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/30 Galleries:Emotive Date Uploaded: Aug 12, 2003
This shot would need to look candid to communicate desolation for me. The subjects look too staged which is unfair if they are truly suffering. Composition is too central and unengaging. [3]
I like the sad expressions on these little faces, but I would have liked to see something done to the photo to capture the mood. Off-centering the girls or perhaps using black and white, with your lighthing focused more on their faces than their pants would have added a more artistic touch.