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08/19/2003 08:07:26 PM |
| Fits the challenge very well...very nice capture. 8 |
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08/18/2003 04:01:42 PM |
Great subject and very good choice to go black and white, and to keep the tone pretty harsh rather than too soft a sepia. That said composition isn't strong for me and I would be interested to see other images from the frame if you took any which focused in on different areas or were taken from different viewpoints.
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08/17/2003 04:41:06 AM |
One of the best pics so far and I love the graffiti [dunno how it's spelt lol]. However, I would have liked to see you consentrate a one area of this scene at a time as it is too distracting at the mo. Looking now, I can see that 'tunnel'. I would have personally got a snap at the edge of that tunnel with all those brilliant shadows and graffiti within.
However, well done. Good try =) |
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08/16/2003 11:04:25 PM |
| i like the photo and the title.. they were very fitting together |
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08/15/2003 05:13:47 PM |
| Nice balance! I think the sepia works well and I like the way you've framed this, too. You've managed to organize the mess before you. 9 |
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08/15/2003 11:42:47 AM |
| Your picture definately show abandonment but the graffiti tells me it is visited frequently. This in it'self removes it from the desolation scene for me. 4 |
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08/15/2003 06:34:10 AM |
| great colour, comp and shot...well done! I would of loved to see a homeless laying down on the ground then i would give you 2 extra points (7) |
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08/15/2003 04:58:55 AM |
| Good picture. May be a smaller frame could work even better |
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08/14/2003 06:27:21 PM |
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08/14/2003 05:27:49 PM |
| Very good shot as well as the place. I think you should left the natural colors though. |
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08/14/2003 01:55:04 AM |
| nice job. definitely desolate. i like the sepia tone. |
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08/13/2003 05:44:22 PM |
| I would like to see this in color too. It does look very desolate. |
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08/13/2003 01:05:52 PM |
| Really captures desolation well. Good use of color and lighting. There isn't anything I can think of that I'd change. |
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08/13/2003 12:47:18 PM |
| Great entry for this week. Your subject is well composed and it has one of the most important qualities for this assignment for my voting - depth. I think desolation should give the viewer a sense of being surrounded by the desolate feeling and you've done a good job with this. |
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08/13/2003 12:03:35 PM |
| Wow, what a strong picture! That's what I mean by desolation. It's my favourite, although it is hard to see the real world. Congrats. |
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08/13/2003 11:48:38 AM |
| good, there is something missing that I can't put into words (so I'm not much help here), but the tone (both colour and emotion) is good, composition is good, lighting is good, etc. Nothing bad to say, just something is missing. |
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08/13/2003 11:35:13 AM |
| wow.. nice photo.. its the 2nd photo that gives me the "desolation" message.. technically i love the sepia tone, nice contrast.. if i could recommend something.. may be it would be to add a indirect subject on the floor.. an used object..something that reflects the youth and society perdition, etc.. |
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08/13/2003 09:41:39 AM |
| Wouldn't want to walk this alley... Fits challenge well. Nice shot. |
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08/13/2003 07:03:49 AM |
| Definitely not for the faint hearted. Must have been scary to take this one. Would have had more of the wow impact if the image were sharper. |
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