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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: Montevideo, Uruguay
Date: May 2, 2006
Aperture: 6.3
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: May 2, 2006

Just a bunch of straws, I tried to form a note there but I'm not sure if you can really tell...

Statistics
Place: 46 out of 208
Avg (all users): 5.9130
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 5.6184
Avg (non-participants): 6.0584
Views since voting: 1104
Views during voting: 338
Votes: 230
Comments: 26
Favorites: 0


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05/19/2006 02:57:29 PM
Greetings from CTP2

I really like the illusion you captured. In addition to having that note in there I like how you can see this as a bunch of straws or as a bunch of tiny balls stacked together. The color also works pretty well as just an abstract even if you don't notice the note framed by it. The composition is also on target.

The only thing that seems a little odd to me are the straws that make up the note, which are not as sharp as the others.

In terms of improving your score in the challenges, I would suggest going with a cleaner look and by that I mean having those straws that define the note as sharp as the others. That's really it. I like abstracts and this is a good abstract.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2006 11:04:05 PM
Yes, I note something. I note that your note is backwards.
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05/09/2006 09:53:27 PM
I saw the note without even looking at the title...very cool!
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05/09/2006 09:14:06 PM
Yes! And Note: it's backwards....but I gave it an 8 anyway...
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05/09/2006 03:55:07 PM
A lot of holes :-)
And maybe a note!
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05/09/2006 02:14:29 PM
this reminds me of those color blindness tests they give to kids in schools
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05/08/2006 06:34:13 PM
love the use of colors but its extremely too busy
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05/08/2006 02:25:19 PM
Very clever! is it a note? but it´s slightly out of focus. Here is my 7.
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05/08/2006 06:38:11 AM
;-)
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05/08/2006 05:12:40 AM
creative idea - love the note you have here - of course my eyes went buggy trying to pick it out thank you. That's right, you messed with a color blind person. Happy now? lol
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05/07/2006 10:47:13 PM
very cool! 10
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05/07/2006 11:02:06 AM
Clever, a musical note.
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05/06/2006 07:31:41 PM
That took a while... Nice pic.
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05/06/2006 01:22:12 AM
Love the music note here (even if it's inverted..hehehe)! Great colors.
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05/05/2006 04:24:35 AM
Like the color scheme you got going on
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05/04/2006 11:27:09 PM
This is a great idea, but I would hve scored it much higher, if the straws had been arranged in some secquince to give a more rhythmic wave pattern.....
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05/04/2006 07:13:55 PM
colorful... key note in fushia ?
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05/04/2006 09:38:21 AM
Yeah, see it. Very creative.
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05/03/2006 01:03:27 PM
Yep, nice idea not sure if the compresion has made this look soft or focus.
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05/03/2006 01:02:39 PM
Great concept for this challenge. And executed very nicely!
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05/03/2006 12:23:13 PM
haha well done. spotted the note before i read the title.
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05/03/2006 12:02:31 PM
I'm always a sucker for bright and colorful, and this definately fits that. A little time arranging the straws could really of reinforced the rhythm theme, seems a little random the way they are now.
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05/03/2006 10:44:07 AM
great picture...you can't see the note in the regular picture but you can see it in the thumbnail!! great shot! 10
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05/03/2006 09:57:19 AM
This is a clever idea, the note is more visible in the thumbnail than in the full sized image. The photo seems a little soft/out of focus.
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05/03/2006 09:33:19 AM
This is like one of those colour blindness tests. But the more I look at it the more crazed my eyes become.
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05/03/2006 01:21:27 AM
Finally found one with rhythm...good job.
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