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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon PowerShot A520
Location: At home
Date: Apr 30, 2006
Aperture: F2.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/15
Galleries: Macro
Date Uploaded: May 1, 2006

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Place: 136 out of 208
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 05/16/2006 12:07:55 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Hi Chugginrail :)

Since you didn't provide any details of your own on this photo, my critique will be short and simple...

I do see the 'rhythm' in the repeating patterns in this photo. However, I think the composition would be much stronger if you had tilted the camera to create some diagonals. The image would be more dynamic that way.

The lighting here doesn't work for me. The highlights are too bright for the theme, as I see it.

John Setzler
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/08/2006 08:28:08 PM
the light source in the middle takes away from the leaf
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/07/2006 06:31:28 PM
Nice use of lighting and DOF to emphasis the subject.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/05/2006 08:08:19 AM
good composition
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 05/05/2006 04:40:57 AM
cool
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/05/2006 03:00:39 AM
I find the backlighting pretty harsh. Also, a deep depth of field would have helped.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/04/2006 07:05:24 PM
impressive..
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 05/03/2006 10:59:14 PM
The brightness of the light seems to be outshining the leaves... perhaps too much contrast? Also, I think having the top leaflets a little more clear would help. Nice otherwise. :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/03/2006 08:37:34 AM
The lighting is a little too sharp in the background.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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