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05/02/2006 07:41:08 PM |
The tomatos are very clear. Need more clarity on the can. Great colors. |
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05/02/2006 05:19:41 PM |
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05/02/2006 11:12:00 AM |
good idea, some problems with focus. |
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05/01/2006 05:57:00 PM |
the colors are certainly complimentary but better focus on your subject is needed. |
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05/01/2006 04:09:11 PM |
This almosts works except it's not cropped nearly tight enough and is out of focus. |
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05/01/2006 07:19:57 AM |
Composition needs work. Didn't care for the straight line dividing the colors. Also focus was way too soft. |
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04/30/2006 10:35:38 PM |
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04/30/2006 09:11:09 PM |
definitaley not healthy :) |
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04/30/2006 06:56:36 PM |
good idea, but the can is somewhat out of focus |
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04/30/2006 05:21:51 PM |
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04/30/2006 05:00:11 PM |
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04/30/2006 04:43:26 PM |
better focus on the beer would have been a great improvement |
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04/30/2006 11:22:45 AM |
I like the concept but the line between the colors make the photograph seem tilted. |
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04/30/2006 08:46:15 AM |
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04/29/2006 09:19:44 PM |
Good idea but out of focus. Also the line between red and green is not straight. |
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04/29/2006 02:38:45 PM |
wow... I am not on board with this image not really sharp at any point also seems out of scale |
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04/29/2006 01:41:47 PM |
The image is not in focus :( |
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04/29/2006 12:08:52 PM |
The beer can focus appears to be a little soft. I like the original idea. |
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04/29/2006 09:24:21 AM |
the can is a bit out of focus and the dividing line could be completely vertical |
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04/29/2006 02:14:43 AM |
This could be better if it was in focus. |
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04/29/2006 01:35:49 AM |
definite focus problems...just doesn't work |
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04/29/2006 12:45:45 AM |
There is nothing wrong with your concept. It is a good idea. The technical execution of this image is its main fault. It lacks clarity and has some serious digital artifacting in the composition. Overall color and contrast are weak. You might consider shooting this from a different perspective, like from ground level or straight down from above with the red-green boundary absolutely horizotal or vertical in the frame. This is kind of a "snapshot" perspective.
I'm guessing you are not very experienced with image post processing. I don't know what editor you are using but you will want to learn as much as possible about it and use it to bring out the best in your pictures. |
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04/29/2006 12:21:57 AM |
focal issues hurt this ... it is oddly interesting though |
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04/28/2006 04:31:18 PM |
A bit blurry - sure complementary colours, though. |
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04/28/2006 10:56:41 AM |
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04/27/2006 10:22:05 AM |
Nice idea, but the lack of focus is very distracting> |
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04/27/2006 04:34:34 AM |
the picture has too many artifacts.
and beer is healthy, yea :) |
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04/26/2006 10:59:55 PM |
good shot
sharp focus would help a lot |
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04/26/2006 10:39:27 PM |
1 - Meets the Challenge mostly color-wise, but the concept, subjects and focus/quality, not holding my attention. |
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04/26/2006 03:02:11 PM |
The Grolsch... is a little blurry, but a good plan. 7 |
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04/26/2006 01:09:43 PM |
Out of focus, center line is leaning, you can see the seams of the cardboard and object don't really relate to each other which does not help to show contrast to the viewer. |
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04/26/2006 11:59:53 AM |
Nice idea and good colours. |
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04/26/2006 11:38:01 AM |
would like to see the can in better focus |
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04/26/2006 09:02:21 AM |
DOF seems a little off and the reflections in the can are a little distracting. |
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04/26/2006 06:48:32 AM |
an out of focus photo of two unrelated things is what I see...sorry, this is poor |
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