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05/05/2006 09:18:54 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
My first impression is quite positive. The blue, the facial expression, the water on the window all are powerful elements that work well together to bring out the emotion of a rainy day.
I very much like the model's pose. He has that somewhat sad but very bored look which is perfect for this shot. The one thing that bothers me is that the bottom of his face is obstructed by the window frame. Having him rest on something that would make him even with the top of the window frame would help bring more of his expression into view.
The blue tint of this picture was a great idea. It adds to the sense of a cloud covered sky and gives it that slightly depressing feeling.
Well done!
-Bill |
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04/30/2006 11:31:38 PM |
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04/30/2006 11:05:44 PM |
hey now. why the long face, rainy days can be very fun too!!! |
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04/30/2006 09:28:31 PM |
I know that feeling, sucks! Now more than ever because rain = no outdoor photography wich is my favorite... ;) |
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04/30/2006 08:49:21 PM |
i like this a lot, try something other then black behind him |
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04/30/2006 08:34:43 PM |
Nice job!! Great choice of color. |
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04/30/2006 07:31:05 PM |
Blue tones work well. Wish the eyes were just a tad clearer. |
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04/30/2006 04:58:11 PM |
..a case of the rainy day blues I see...
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04/30/2006 04:55:20 PM |
nice blue tone great over all composition and great framing...really like this. |
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04/30/2006 02:38:43 PM |
Love the blue hues to go with the blue mood. |
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04/29/2006 10:53:37 PM |
I like the simplicity of this photo and the authentic expression of the boy (nothing worse than a rainy day at that age). The blue tones go well with the theme, too. |
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04/29/2006 04:32:58 PM |
Looks so sad.... Nice colors and composition. |
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04/29/2006 03:59:44 PM |
I think the colorfulness works against the mood of your shot. |
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04/29/2006 01:55:01 PM |
nice take on the challenge. he looks so sad in this image. |
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04/29/2006 12:45:04 PM |
Nice photo, the curtains add a nice framing... |
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04/29/2006 11:20:42 AM |
I like the blue colour cast here, and the composition is nicely done too. |
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04/29/2006 10:33:36 AM |
I like the blue tones on this photo which match your subjects clothing well. Looks like he has blue under his eyes??? |
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04/29/2006 05:59:39 AM |
Nice Idea but image looks a little off focus
I like the blue in this it reflects the mood |
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04/29/2006 05:35:17 AM |
theres nothing worse when you're a kid. |
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04/29/2006 03:20:58 AM |
I can remember doing the same thing, staring out of the window waiting for it to stop raining. Thanks for the memories :-) |
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04/29/2006 02:25:07 AM |
Nice mood, color palette and narrative. |
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04/27/2006 07:21:41 AM |
love the bluish tinge to this, adds to the rainy atmosphere |
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04/26/2006 03:43:43 PM |
aaawh, he's bored and blue! ;-)
I think you might check your whitebalance, but my guess is this is what you wanted ;) |
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04/25/2006 10:09:42 PM |
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04/25/2006 09:05:22 PM |
very blue :) NIce framing |
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04/25/2006 09:02:04 PM |
Very compelling shot. The blue and the rain really make this. Congrats. |
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04/25/2006 09:14:53 AM |
Great photo! The blueish tones of the photo work well together with the rainy day sadness. |
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04/24/2006 09:12:20 PM |
I like the color and the look on the his face. |
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04/24/2006 12:35:01 AM |
Uh oh, I feel like we just showed up to the prom wearing the same dress.... |
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