First Impression - the most important one: Interesting framing here .. a little soft on the focus ...
Composition: I like that the boat is in the single frame here ... it works on that ... the angle of the pic also works to me.
Subject: meets the challenge .. I really hope this wasn't really your bedroom .. cos no shot is worth getting pnuemonia.
Technical (Colour and light): I like the darkness it adds to the mood .. but the shot itself is soft and a little out of focus.
To grow its vote?: I think this did well ... it is a solid shot .. and nicely emotive .. the sky being blue may have added .1 but I think that is all ...
Summary: Your work is a little like mine in consistency going through periods of fantastic and ok .. but never "bad" ... keep up the work towards the consistency and improvement.
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the window there is interestin by itself, but it isn't framing the point of interest like it should be... or maybe I'm wrong, maybe it is framing the broken glass... maybe it could have used a little bit longer exposure
I love the combination between the broken glass window and the dramatic clouds away over the horizon. Maybe you could have cropped a little the dark (black) area around the window.
Did you break it for the photograph? :-)
Didn't think so! The colours are good, good setup, good idea but the focus is a bit poor. Contrast a bit too much, making white lines along with dark ones. Still overall a fine picture.
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