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05/10/2006 07:40:52 PM |
Greetings TO the Critique Club. Thank you for letting me know the proper decorum on commenting on my own work. I want you to know I find this very difficult to do. I am a very new photographer and am apprehensive to look like I either, don't know what the heck I am talking about or, even more dreadfull, look like I think I know it all when in fact I know nothing. That bieng said I am not very happy with this photo the DOF seems far to shallow and leaves too much of the flower just slightly out of focus. I do however think that my croping is quite creative and I enjoy how the black complements the yellow and assists in making the subject stand out. I have yet to fiqure out how to get that incredibly crisp focus that I have seen others attain so perfectly. Perhaps you can give me some clues. I have always owned point and shoot and just recently have purchased a D70, the controll is daunting and I find something new every time I take it out.
Thank you
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05/01/2006 04:54:30 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
I no longer offer in depth critique on photos when the photographer hasn't included his/her own thoughts and comments on the image when it is submitted to the challenge.
My critique wouldn't be worth much not knowing what you think about your own image. |
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04/25/2006 09:06:54 AM |
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04/24/2006 02:19:28 PM |
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04/22/2006 08:30:16 PM |
| Great colors and good background choice to set off the brilliant yellow. |
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04/21/2006 11:56:04 PM |
| nice contrast of colors...very pretty |
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04/21/2006 11:14:44 PM |
| I find very distracting the shallow depth of field you've used, as it totally blurs the top half of the flower. It's still a good picture, but it leaves something significant to be desired. You might have used a narrower aperture, or focused at an interim portion of the subject, so to leave more of it at both ends in the circle of confusion. |
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04/20/2006 07:19:49 PM |
| Seems to be mostly out of focus. I would not have cut the bottom off the flower. |
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04/20/2006 04:37:15 PM |
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04/20/2006 09:31:51 AM |
| Bright and cheerful photo. I like that you framed with the bottom of the flower cropped, but I wonder if it might of looked more balanced if you had done something to one side or the other. |
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04/20/2006 09:09:56 AM |
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04/20/2006 06:17:39 AM |
| I like the brightness, and the freshness, of this image..... |
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04/19/2006 03:37:32 PM |
Fresh looking... love it...
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