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04/30/2006 02:12:41 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Lovely portrait, but a bit too much NI and a few stray hairs are distracting.
Composition:
Works well, and is pretty strong.
Subject:
Subject is clear and I love the eyes.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: Seems natural, it might have a bit of a blue cast to it (very little).
Focus is sharp.
Lighting works well for you and is very flattering to her skin.
To grow its vote?:
Neat image (or what ever noise reduction you used) seems a bit overdone. And voters are starting to not like that look.
Summary:
Lovely portrait, scale back your efforts to hide noise (skin blemishes) and you'll do well.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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04/22/2006 03:24:35 PM |
| Her skin looks preternaturally smooth, as if too much Neat Image or similar device was used. I love the shad of her hair and the lighting used. |
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04/22/2006 12:12:36 AM |
| Huh ... Redhead without freckles, love the hair and eyes but the skin tone seems a little pink, fun way to fill the frame. |
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04/20/2006 08:29:01 PM |
| Lovely composition and clarity...the angle does elongate her face a bit much, and the color seems just a tiny bit "off" on my monitor (which could very well be, well...my monitor!) but overall it's quite nice. She has mesmerizing eyes. :) |
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04/20/2006 03:51:44 AM |
good closeup shot. just not too sure about the cropping tho.
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04/19/2006 02:41:49 AM |
| Very sharp - and a beautiful model - 9 from me! |
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04/18/2006 07:41:43 PM |
I've never seen someone fill up the frame almost entirely with a person's face. it looks almost like she's in a box.
good work |
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04/18/2006 07:56:43 AM |
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04/17/2006 04:00:42 PM |
| nice shot, i find the whispy hair over her face a little distracting though, love the lighting. hope you do well |
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04/17/2006 02:51:22 PM |
| The color of her skin appears unnatural to me and in a way that isn't particulary flattering. Otherwise this is a worthy photo. |
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04/17/2006 07:13:52 AM |
| Great red hair and eyes. Well done, hope you do well with this... |
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04/17/2006 05:51:39 AM |
| I didn't like the paleface look to begin with, but it has the feel of a cosmetics advertising shot so I've changed my mind. |
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04/17/2006 05:47:36 AM |
| This is an advance challenge... the image would have been helped a lot by cleaning up the stray hairs on her face 6 |
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04/17/2006 04:56:43 AM |
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04/17/2006 01:21:26 AM |
| The skin tones seem off somehow... |
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04/17/2006 12:28:45 AM |
| Stunning hair. The eyes seem a bit oversharpened to me. |
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