Seems a little off focus, not sure if that was intentional. I also feel like it would have been more striking if the subject had been pushed back to the left a bit but that's just my opinion. It is still a very piece, though.
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in this challenge.
This is ok. Perhaps more focus on the man was in order. It seems the cameras focus wandered to the seating before him. I do like the tones, but I can't really grasp any real interest for me here. It's a 4 from me.
Interesting fella; Strong composition, but perhaps missing a sense of detail, and without that sense of the perfect moment that would make the lack of it irrelevant.