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07/14/2002 11:38:00 PM |
| It wasn't too cliche. I'm trying to figure out how you might spice it up a little bit. First, I think I'd try to shoot somewhere or move your light source so that the only shadow on the wall is the kinfe and hand -- especially since they were apparently different distances from the light and one is darker than the other. Initially the girls pose seemed very real, but the longer I looked at it, the more it seemed like she's just sitting there -- it has something to do with the hand (it looks like it's just kind of draped over her head). Still, nice work. |
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07/14/2002 08:46:00 PM |
| At least your cliche was well-executed. Very nice framing and clean, sharp shadows. |
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07/14/2002 06:31:00 PM |
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07/14/2002 11:49:00 AM |
| At least the title tells it like it is :-) |
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07/13/2002 03:38:00 PM |
| I like the idea a lot. Also well executed. |
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07/13/2002 02:48:00 PM |
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07/13/2002 01:46:00 AM |
| awsome... looks like you got 1 up on the other shawdow picuture... |
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07/13/2002 12:51:00 AM |
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07/10/2002 01:53:00 PM |
| Is a soul rendering addition to the thoughs of modern society and what some of the world lives in every day. |
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07/10/2002 01:14:00 PM |
| Good use of the shadow... |
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07/10/2002 12:52:00 PM |
| subject 10 lighting 9 focus 8 composition 8 total 9 |
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07/10/2002 09:58:00 AM |
| Cliche or not, you pulled it off well. |
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07/10/2002 06:47:00 AM |
| Interesting concept :) It didn't turn out to be cliche after all :) = 7 - jmsetzler |
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07/10/2002 01:07:00 AM |
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07/09/2002 10:40:00 PM |
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07/09/2002 08:59:00 PM |
| i almost did this one :) . i would suggest more dramatic lighting (ie one sidelight) and maybe black and white. mag 99 |
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07/09/2002 03:53:00 AM |
| Nice concept........ very nice concept but not shot very well...toomuch light and visibility of ambience to instigate fear |
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07/08/2002 11:27:00 PM |
| Good use of shadow. I also like the way it is composed and shot. One minor nit-picky thing, her body looks relaxed. Unfourtunately, I have no idea how to tell you to correct that, it was just an observation. |
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07/08/2002 06:16:00 PM |
| Well executed cliche. Needs gore. 7 Swash |
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07/08/2002 01:07:00 PM |
| may have been better with her facing the camera |
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07/08/2002 12:52:00 PM |
| Good work. I love this series ;) Kee |
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07/08/2002 01:35:00 AM |
| Y'er right! And a well done one at that. |
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07/08/2002 12:58:00 AM |
somebody had to do it, hehe. but you've done it really well.
it probably would have been better without the other shadows |
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