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03/14/2006 04:06:48 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Bob :)
This photo did rather well in the context of the challenge and doesn't really require much critique. All I may be able to offer is my personal feelings on the image rather than a way to have it score higher...
The photo obviously meets the challenge and the voters seemed to like it. Compositionally, it feels a bit odd to me. It feels like a riot is taking place, and the partial person/object in the lower right seem to be the focal point, and there isn't enough context there to sort out what is happening. I'm not familiar with the term "Mosh Pit" so I couldn't use that to help me understand the image...
John Setzler
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03/13/2006 06:24:12 PM |
| I bounced quite a powerful flash off the (high) ceiling. At ISO1600. |
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03/13/2006 12:57:56 PM |
Is this a non-smoking venue? My experience in thse situation is that it is smoky and the lighting is not as homogenous
Did you use any extra lighting? if so what kind? I love this shot but if i tried to take it, i think it would be turnn out blurry
with no flash or look too harsh with a flash. |
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03/13/2006 12:35:32 PM |
| emotion captured. flawless in that pursuit... |
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03/12/2006 10:38:37 PM |
| amazing capture, the center of attention shifts dynamically. |
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03/12/2006 05:20:56 PM |
| The intensity of some of the faces is great. Makes me glad I'm not down in there. They'd kill me. Great shot. |
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03/12/2006 12:02:57 PM |
| What is happening here, great timing! |
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03/12/2006 03:10:09 AM |
| A lot of movement and works really well in BW. |
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03/11/2006 02:03:56 AM |
| Fantastic stop action capture! Cant help but wonder what I'm missing with this crop though. Great work. |
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03/10/2006 11:43:56 AM |
| great action shot. definitely a top 10 winner, if not ribbon. great job. 10 |
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03/09/2006 11:04:10 PM |
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03/09/2006 09:55:01 PM |
| Oh, flashback! That used to be me. Except we called it "slam-dancing" back in the dark ages. This is a great shot full of energy and expression. Nice focus and good exposure. Good job of freezing a moment in time. My only nitpick is that the two figures in the foreground don't do much for the composition, IMHO. It doesn't look like there was any other choice but to include them, though, without chopping off someone else. This is one of my favorites from this challenge. |
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03/09/2006 06:58:36 PM |
| Looks like a fight! This doesn't work well for a square crop. The person at the very bottom throws the balance off. Othewise It is a great shot. |
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03/09/2006 04:15:22 PM |
| I like the perceived motion here. Reminds me of high school... |
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03/09/2006 02:05:21 PM |
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03/09/2006 12:28:15 PM |
| lovely composition, with the tension and the space. super |
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03/09/2006 10:15:13 AM |
brilliant! just perfect, makes u feel the cramped situation.
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03/09/2006 08:41:33 AM |
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03/07/2006 11:38:45 PM |
| has to be another bobster lobster shot - I think it would be better cropped without the guy's head at the bottom, but then it wouldn't be square...oy vey |
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03/07/2006 10:39:14 PM |
| great capture..dynamic shot.. |
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03/07/2006 06:10:35 PM |
| What an action-packed drama! |
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03/07/2006 04:44:07 PM |
| I really really like this and the square crop great as the energy is bursting out of the proverbial box! |
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03/07/2006 04:18:43 PM |
| Your talent shines through this shot. Great work. Engery, power music and youth 10 |
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03/07/2006 03:48:10 PM |
| Great details. Nice framing. I like the frozen movement - very nice. The only peeve is the person at the bottom of the frame. I wish I could see more or less of him. As is, he is not a part of the image, but he is there - a distraction. |
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03/07/2006 03:40:18 PM |
Like the way you convey the energy and agression in this picture. I'm not quite sure about the crop? The lower part is not that interesting perhaps?
Good job even so! |
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03/06/2006 05:46:40 PM |
| Great documentary style photograph. The toning works well and the choice for b&w makes the viewer look at what's going without being distracted by colors of shirts, pants and shoes. The underside looks a bit cut off, but it doesn't hurt that much as the energy is in the upper part. 10 |
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03/06/2006 04:48:25 AM |
| Cool image.. love the caos. my eye is drawn to the young man in the front middle left portion with the open shirt. His eyes guide me to the bottom off the image. What exactly is going on beyond the "SEPUL" in the bottom right? |
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03/06/2006 02:07:30 AM |
| Only 1 guy comes to mind. Bobster? Sweet Duotones here and love the facial expression on the one guy. For some reason I wish the guy at the lower right hand corner was not there. Anyway, sharp and great focus and DOF. |
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03/06/2006 01:13:28 AM |
| great capture ... this picture is full of life |
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