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06/01/2006 08:43:16 AM |
| under-rated for sure ... the idea is great and the cloud is perfectly subtle - there may be a bit too much noise but that's the only thing I can see. This one slipped by some people I think. |
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03/02/2006 03:47:12 AM |
Thanks a lot Alice for your good critique and kind words about my photo. I also want to thank all who have voted and commented on this photo. It's much appreciated.
Message edited by author 2006-03-02 03:48:27. |
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02/27/2006 10:49:26 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
It is always an adventure to open a new image to Critique, and this is certainly a good example of that.
It's an original, exciting picture; one that is deceptively simple, yet needs a good deal of study to comprehend. As an aside, I'm glad you Icelanders are getting enough sunlight and blue sky to manage a good image this time of year ;>)
I"m of two thoughts about the child and the cloud. The child has 'cold' tones; the cloud 'warm' tones. Obviously difficult to obtain in one photograph, but in two - there they are. Even though it is an anomaly, I like the juxtaposition. That bit of tension takes this image from a 'photo' to 'art'.
Even though you were not rewarded highly for this Challenge entry, I hope you are pleased with it. It is a good one.
Alice |
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02/21/2006 11:45:21 AM |
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02/21/2006 09:31:36 AM |
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02/19/2006 11:51:52 PM |
| Creative. The composition is good too, I just wish that the child's right foot was on the "ground". It bothers me up there in the "air" like that. Other than that it's very neat. |
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02/19/2006 10:29:28 AM |
| Stunning. I might like it better without the border, but a very clever idea. |
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02/18/2006 10:29:48 PM |
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02/18/2006 12:05:19 PM |
| Broken heart. I Love the way as he stands on the frame looking at the broken heart. |
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02/17/2006 02:14:17 PM |
| Sweet! I like hte way the child is standing on the edge of the frame - the land is unimportant to the shot and thus excluded - very brave. I like the heart shaped cloud - I might have played around with it a touch to exaggerate the heart shape further but it's certainly discernable. Fun and different! |
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02/17/2006 01:16:47 PM |
| Nice touch with the clouds and child in foreground. Simple yet speaks volumes. I rated this a 6 |
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02/16/2006 09:47:17 PM |
| Hope this isn't too "nitpicky" but IMO, this is a great submission/concept. What keeps it from being perfect, to me, is that she appears to be floating. I don't know if that was your intent. I think there should be just a little bit of ground showing under her feet so as not to look like she was pasted in. Everything else about this is awesome & the title was especially fitting, too. |
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02/16/2006 05:51:15 PM |
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02/16/2006 02:29:22 PM |
| Nicely subtle, looking forward to seeing how it was done. |
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02/15/2006 02:27:50 PM |
| Cute image. I like the creation of the cloud heart. |
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02/15/2006 09:43:24 AM |
| What a great catch! Beautiful composition and perfect for the challenge. |
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02/15/2006 06:37:44 AM |
is the cloud meant to be heart shaped?
nice composition. |
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02/15/2006 05:04:42 AM |
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02/15/2006 03:54:22 AM |
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