Was it intentional to place this unrotated? Assuming it's an error I quite like the shot. I would have cropped out the detail at the top though which kills it a bit.
The horizontal framing of this seems rather odd, but I will assume that is what you meant to do. I think it needs a bit more contrast overall. It just seems to be muted grays.
This looks a bit like my self portrait a while back hopefully you will do better than i did. Would like to see more contrast in light and dark and wish the tires on top and whatever else that is was cropped out.