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Notice 4
Notice 4
Joey Lawrence

Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Off-Centered Subject II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE 7Hi
Location: School Bus, Ontario, Canada
Date: Jan 24, 2006
Galleries: Candid, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jan 25, 2006

i have ripped off xion's acid

Place: 181 out of 357
Avg (all users): 5.4409
Avg (commenters): 6.8000
Avg (participants): 5.3750
Avg (non-participants): 5.5862
Views since voting: 1572
Views during voting: 251
Votes: 186
Comments: 11
Favorites: 1 (view)

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02/12/2006 08:00:35 PM
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice, good focus, great portrait work.

Good composition, it doesn't rellay play too heavy of the notice you used for the title, and that may have confused the voters ... who are often confused :)

Defiantely meets off centred, both for the bloke and the signage.

Technical (Colour and light):
I like the lighting here, would have liked to know what you actually used ... but probably daylight in the majority with a fill flash ... oh well :)

To grow its vote?:
You have found an interesting character - again. It is nicely off centred, I don't know why it did not do better, the grittiness of the colours and the reality of the picture may have counted against it this time.

I like this shot, it is good for the portfolio, even if not the highest scoring. But this game ain't only about ribbons really.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.


  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/06/2006 09:30:35 AM
I don't understand the voting here. But even giants fall from time to time. Still. A great pic of the bus driver.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/06/2006 01:22:36 AM
gave you a 7 - surprised this didn't score higher -
the composition reminded me some of DrAchoo's Tribute entry. I thought the use of image space was good
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/06/2006 01:17:23 AM
Beatcha again, little boy :P
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/06/2006 12:29:04 AM
i gave u a 9 not that it helped much. :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/05/2006 11:05:19 PM
Great character study. 7
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/05/2006 06:54:22 PM
off centered, doesn't look like it to me
01/30/2006 04:46:20 PM
Superb. Can say why I like it so much, I just do.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/30/2006 05:28:14 AM
a great earthy shot...love the grain, really suits it...he seems to be saying something
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/30/2006 02:25:56 AM
gutsy, raw, i like!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/30/2006 01:04:52 AM
Lovely characterisation
  Photographer found comment helpful.

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