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01/29/2006 09:15:15 PM |
| I could have sworn I congratulated you on top 10. Really well done! |
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01/28/2006 03:17:15 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very crisp, very clean and fits my expectations of the challenge well.
Composition:
Maybe not the strongest compostion in the world, but certainly not the worst. I'd like to see a bit more of the background with your subject more off-center.
Subject:
Subject is strong and stands out quite well from the busy background.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
All of your technicals are dead-on. Focus is sharp, color is well saturated and natural, lighting is very good. Exposure is perfect.
To grow its vote?:
I'm afraid I'm not much help on growing a vote over 10th place. Perhaps, a bit stronger composition would help.
Summary:
Wonderful job on this challenge. You are well on your way to a ribbon.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/23/2006 09:41:41 PM |
| A pensive study with very pleasing dacial expression and lovely colors. Congratulations on your top ten finish. |
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01/23/2006 05:48:16 AM |
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01/23/2006 05:26:24 AM |
| Ja broertjie, congrats on another high scoring top 10'er. You are taking great pics. |
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01/22/2006 10:04:58 PM |
| Good capture with good candid expression. 7 |
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01/21/2006 10:27:19 PM |
| Fantastic fit to the challenge, great DOF to isolate your subject (just as requested) good focus and composition |
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01/21/2006 07:13:04 PM |
| very nice. perfect exposure on the face. |
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01/20/2006 08:25:52 PM |
| This is awesome! An absolute perfect fit for this challenge! Such an interesting face! 10 |
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01/20/2006 03:57:54 PM |
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01/20/2006 12:29:48 PM |
Excellent shot for this challenge.
Very clean, nice detail & tones are beautiful. (8) |
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01/19/2006 02:55:51 AM |
| Nice shot! The composition is a bit boring, with the main subject dead in the middle. |
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01/17/2006 12:09:01 PM |
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01/16/2006 03:12:22 PM |
| very nice..... the calmness comes through |
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01/16/2006 09:29:55 AM |
| great shot...sharp and crisp with great DOF...top could use a little trim |
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01/16/2006 04:50:54 AM |
| This is a very fine shot, what a lovely study in serenity within chaos as you say |
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01/16/2006 01:35:22 AM |
| this is the perfect fit in this difficult challenge. You captured the serenity of a man who seems to know peace. The tack sharpness of your pic and the DOF is just wonderful. Best of luck, great shot! Hope for a ribbon! |
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01/16/2006 01:32:19 AM |
| Very nice. I like the colorful background. Suits the challenge perfectly. |
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01/16/2006 12:47:42 AM |
| Wonderful use of DOF. The rich colors and compostion add up to a great photo ! |
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