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01/27/2006 03:55:18 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
It says a lot about this photo that I remember it vividly from the challenge. It took the spirit of the challenge and produced a memorable image.
Composition:
Composition is interesting and quite strong. Perhaps the subject should have dominated the composition a bit more.
Subject:
Clear, well defined and quite interesting ;-)
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Focus looks a bit soft to me, but I think this is from the noise in the image rather than missed focus.
Colour : Good B&W treatment, but I'd like to see the contrast bumped up just a bit.
Light: Light is good, exposure is good.
To grow its vote?:
Tough challenge, but I think the noise hurt you a bit.
Summary:
A well executed take on this challenge. As I said in my opening statement, you've created a memorable image.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/22/2006 10:38:35 PM |
hahaha, great facial expression on this guy. the title really makes the picture.
on the more technical side, i'd have liked to see more depth in the shadows. i don't mind the grain. a composition that allowed us to see more of the traffic cop would have been really nice - |
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01/22/2006 09:53:19 PM |
| Good capture of an attitude. |
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01/22/2006 05:26:21 PM |
| good reflex shot, you could have lucked out more on the framing (I would see it a little more wide angle) but in these condition you get what you get... (9) |
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01/22/2006 02:56:53 PM |
| fantastic capture, made me laugh! |
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01/22/2006 02:13:30 PM |
| Great expression on the traffic warden's face. Nice capture but the B&W conversion seems to be lacking the full contrast range i.e a bit grey. |
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01/22/2006 05:38:58 AM |
| Were you beat up? Nice isolation. Nice action shot. I think that I would crop most of the sky. It is very distracting. |
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01/21/2006 07:15:37 PM |
| damn, that looks like one pissed of "Meter #*!@%". good shot. don't really like the grain. |
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01/20/2006 03:00:25 PM |
| 8 points just for your wonderful subject. |
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01/20/2006 12:46:49 PM |
Good street candid and a good choice for B&W. Her expression is cute.
Not sure what happened on the left side of the pic - seems like a partial border - a bit distracting, but oh well - easy fix. (6) |
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01/19/2006 10:09:45 PM |
| What I want to know is... did she kick your butt? Nice capture! |
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01/19/2006 09:46:19 AM |
| Nice moment. I think that DOF isolation is not used sufficiently in this picture for this challenge. |
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01/19/2006 12:42:55 AM |
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01/18/2006 07:52:19 PM |
| Great, horrible expression. |
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01/18/2006 01:47:33 PM |
| That's a great expression you've captured. Overall, though, I'd like to see her legs; there's just this black trunk going down where they should be. I'll ignore the pole sticking out of her head since it's out of focus, but the whole shot (including her) seems grainy. |
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01/18/2006 09:27:53 AM |
| I think I know where she wants to stick those parking tickets...I hope you ran for the hills before she caught up with you:) Great capture, you deserve a ribbon just for having the ***** |
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01/16/2006 09:25:41 PM |
| Great capture. I am scared for you. Nice grain. I think it adds to the toughness. Contrast and exposure well done. |
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01/16/2006 05:23:43 PM |
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01/16/2006 02:56:08 PM |
| Great exspression and b/w/ |
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01/16/2006 02:43:59 PM |
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01/16/2006 10:46:49 AM |
| To my eye, you haven't used shallow depth of field to set off the subject from the background. |
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01/16/2006 10:41:29 AM |
| great expression you captured! |
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01/16/2006 10:09:44 AM |
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01/16/2006 05:01:25 AM |
| He's a bit of a meany :) Great character study. |
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01/16/2006 12:45:59 AM |
| he really is a man on a mission...great candid capture |
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