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Challenge: Burst of Color (Advanced Editing IV)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D100
Lens: Sigma 24-70mm f/2.8 EX Aspherical DF for Nikon
Location: Battle Creek, Michigan
Date: Jan 7, 2006
Aperture: F16
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/180
Galleries: Nature, Floral
Date Uploaded: Jan 7, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 147 out of 244
Avg (all users): 5.2667
Avg (commenters): 5.4000
Avg (participants): 5.1327
Avg (non-participants): 5.3858
Views since voting: 883
Views during voting: 323
Votes: 240
Comments: 8
Favorites: 1 (view)


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01/21/2006 10:41:42 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club

One of the things I enjoy about this Critique Club job is getting the chance to look at people's portfolios. I must tell you that I enjoy your bird pictures immensely - and for sheer "awwww factor" your cygnets in training is a delight.

Okay, back to work: You have an image that meets the Challenge but just didn't excite the voters all that much. I think some of your commentors touched on the main problem, when they suggested the red rose did not appear to be as fresh as it could be. The colors of all of them, however, are quite beautiful. The shadows are indeed a bit harsh and I also think the moisture on them (if emulating dew) was a touch heavy-handed.

So, I'd suggest trying diffused lighting. Using a tripod is often helpful with still-lifes, so with that in mind, think about taking your aperture to a lower number, experimenting with 5.6 or 6.3 or even lower, but not increasing your ISO.

I wish you continued success in DPC. It sure was fun looking at your portfolio.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/15/2006 10:09:55 PM
Nice use of color, may have done better if the lighting were softer.
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01/13/2006 09:41:36 PM
like the contrasts
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01/13/2006 12:47:41 AM
I like the way the red rose is standing out here. IMHO the lighting can be improved though. It seems a tad harsh with areas of the shot appearing overexposed os 'soft' in focus. Just my humble opinion, nice shot nonetheless
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01/12/2006 07:52:49 PM
Cecent colors and floral arrangement. The image appears slightly out of focus but not soft focused.
01/12/2006 06:13:12 PM
too bad the red rose is wilting a bit. :(. I think the image could have been improved with a light colored rose as the "burst" and darker colored ones as the backround, but good job over all.
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01/12/2006 06:35:33 AM
A true burst of color in this red rose..... This is such a lovely image so well done.....
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01/09/2006 06:42:02 AM
nice
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