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07/07/2003 12:55:21 AM |
*Critiqe Corner*
When I first looked at it I thought the focus was horrible then I took a second glance and realized you used a very selective focus on this. I'm actually here wondering if you may have done this in macro.
The one thing I might change on this whole image is the placement of the sliver ribbon it seems to be cutting the bell in half and could easily be corrected.
Over all it is a prety cool photo when you really look at it and think about it. Very nice keepsake too for the bride and groom.
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07/06/2003 09:24:06 PM |
| The set-up is pretty nice. I think the soft focus would be appropriatei, but I think it should be consistent. across the image. |
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07/04/2003 07:15:03 PM |
| Nice idea but lot of focus problems...better DOF would have helped greatly. thanks |
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07/03/2003 12:34:13 PM |
| A larger depth of field (larger number) would've made more of the text in focus. |
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07/03/2003 11:03:49 AM |
| What a nice wat to preserve a momento from a great occasion. I am not sure if I like the bell out of focus, or if it should have been more included. At least for the challenge, more bell. For prosperity it is super as is. 8 |
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07/02/2003 06:20:44 PM |
| I really love the shallow depth of field, with the incredible texture of the ribbon in focus. Great colors. |
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07/02/2003 12:15:38 PM |
| Focus isn't good - the only thing in full focus is the ribbon. |
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06/30/2003 08:04:18 PM |
| I want to steal this one when i do a wedding! very nice |
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06/30/2003 01:09:08 PM |
| Pretty, but not crazy for the composition...which I believe has caused the focus to be out of line. |
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06/30/2003 04:04:55 AM |
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06/30/2003 01:11:55 AM |
| I really like the muted colors in this photo. The only part that bothers me is the glare at the bottom of the bell. |
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06/30/2003 01:10:01 AM |
| I wish the bell was a little more in focus since it is your primary subject. Congratulations (if it was your day). |
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