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12/10/2005 10:16:37 PM |
**Critique Club**
Nicely processed. I like the subdued colors in this shot. The power lines on the top, horizontal, could have provided a good frame, but when I look at the image, the power pole and the lines divert my attention from the main subject. They do add to the 'industrial' feel of the overall photo, but distract as well as they are dominant compared to your subject. the pole on left also has the perspective distortion making it tilted while the chimneys in the background are straight.
Technically the photo is well exposed and has a good dof.
If you have any questions, please feel free to pm me
-Gaurawa
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12/07/2005 01:27:57 PM |
So many people had smokestacks in this Challenge.
Some did it so beautifully and deserved to win.
This would have been MUCH improved without the lines. |
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12/06/2005 03:57:19 PM |
| If this picure of the plant were taken in front of the power lines, it would have turned out so much nicer. If you could not manage to get infront of them, then a tighter zoom on the plant itself would give the same effect by eliminating the power lines from the pic. |
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12/05/2005 02:13:51 PM |
| Very nicely taken picture. It really looks "industrial" - even the wires add to it! Good job! |
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12/04/2005 01:23:34 AM |
| where was this shot taken. it looks very familiar. was there another angle without the power pole? |
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12/03/2005 05:29:26 PM |
| This has some beautiful light, mood and power. I just tried a crop that cut out the power pole and the tank. You should see it, stunning. . |
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12/02/2005 11:31:53 AM |
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12/02/2005 09:50:40 AM |
| This photo is perfect for a industria challenge.10l |
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11/30/2005 02:11:39 PM |
| Nice, looks tilted to the right a little. Could you have zoomed closer to get rid of the power lines? I realize this is an industrial challenge but the lines and that pole are distracting. |
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11/30/2005 11:42:16 AM |
| A great subject but it would be a better photo without the powerline or maybe cropped differently. |
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11/30/2005 11:32:25 AM |
| the utility pole and lines seam to take away from the background. |
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11/30/2005 10:29:28 AM |
Your image is very busy and industrious, it has dirty 'oily' feel to it
I like how you attempted to frame you subject area with the utility poles. I thinkb a tighter crop, just to the left of the second pole would have been more efective. I also wonder what difference a step or two to the right might have made. |
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11/30/2005 09:58:59 AM |
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11/30/2005 01:54:10 AM |
Great capture. Really nails the challenge details. I'm not sure about two things though, first it seems a bit blurry to me. Secondly, I'm not sure if it's the power lines / pole but it seems tilted to the left.
The more I look at this the more I think it's just an illusion with the pole thing...
Steam/Smoke is captured well. |
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