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After the forbidden fruit
After the forbidden fruit
gerakdepan


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Knife Fork Spoon (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Olympus E-300 EVOLT
Location: Singapore
Date: Nov 28, 2005
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/2.5
Galleries: Abstract, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Nov 28, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 159 out of 163
Avg (all users): 3.9746
Avg (commenters): 3.3333
Avg (participants): 3.7241
Avg (non-participants): 4.1727
Views since voting: 734
Views during voting: 317
Votes: 197
Comments: 10
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12/18/2005 03:49:40 AM
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

'After the forbidden fruit'

I found this image to be very hard on the eyes, as much is out of focus, and that which is in focus is cluttered by it's surroundings. I really had to search the image to find the mathc with your title - just don't think it was strong enough. Perhaps if you had only the spoon with reflection in the image it would be better.
As for the desat - does not work for me here either.

Sorry I could not be more positive.

- Linda
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/11/2005 07:00:14 PM
I cant make heads or tails of this.
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12/11/2005 07:48:19 AM
photo is too cluttered. viewer cant readily find point of focus. simplify composition next time. imho
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/08/2005 06:21:39 PM
I find this a bit busy and the foregroung being out of focus can't show what you are trying to achieve
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12/07/2005 01:47:43 AM
This composition is a little to busy for me. The painting on the object to the far right seems to draw the most attention, but doesn't appear to be a main subject. I think simplifying this shot could bring out it's real message better.
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12/05/2005 11:26:56 PM
too busy....don't know what the main subject is....
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12/05/2005 02:02:26 PM
A bit too busy I think. Maybe brighten a bit as well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/05/2005 12:50:33 PM
Too dark - can't see.
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12/05/2005 12:49:11 PM
This is absolutly not working for me. Total chaos, I didn't see the bottle until after a while, the lightning is dull, and the frog-something in background is stealing all the attention.
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12/05/2005 12:21:00 PM
This is very busy and confusing. I think I can see a bit of a fork on the left hand side, but my eyes keep going back to the frog (?) on the right, since that is the only thing with real focus. I don't quite understand what you were trying to do here. 4
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