Back pain, joint pain, memory loss, metabolic efficiency, immune booster, energy, weight loss, apple
nico_blue
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12/08/2005 04:46:32 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Technical : Nice DoF, good focus, good composition and exposure. Nothing you can improve here.
Artistic : The biggest thing that comes to mind is the bold red background. It's a little harsh on the eyes. The apple also disappears doesn't stand out at all with the red. If you meant to use red to signify something, it was lost on me. Besides the background, the photo just isn't that compelling. There's nothing to draw me in and keep my attention.
Challenge met : Meets the challenge just fine.
Conclusion : Just short of the top 20 is good, (maybe not for you ;), but for the rest of us it is. To place higher, I recommend a different background color and more importantly a more interesting subject.
Cheers,
Jadin
Message edited by author 2005-12-08 16:51:01. |
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12/02/2005 03:55:04 PM |
| This is good! I feel this way, too. |
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11/29/2005 07:22:43 PM |
| Nice colors...I guess the one apple a day did not keep the doctor away. |
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11/29/2005 01:45:54 PM |
| I like the concept and the shot but the title is rather long. |
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11/29/2005 12:07:39 PM |
| Great idea that is well executed. Good job. |
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11/29/2005 09:21:08 AM |
| Did my mother take this picture? It sure looks like her breakfast! Very cute. |
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11/28/2005 10:49:36 PM |
| Nice shot, I was planning on doing something simular, but did't get it in before the deadline. I was going to spell adulthood on glass over a mirror, with all of our meds. Good luck. |
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11/28/2005 07:35:07 PM |
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11/28/2005 05:59:26 PM |
| like the composition, would have liked to see the apple included in focus as it's mentioned in the title with the same weight as the supplements. the chip in the plate under the brown pill adds some visual interest, imo. |
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11/28/2005 05:58:26 PM |
| lol! really funny yet true take on this challenge. |
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11/28/2005 10:05:14 AM |
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11/28/2005 05:05:43 AM |
Ouch! Don´t envy the person that has to chow down on this daily :D
Like the shot, nicely lit, great DOF and good composition, gave it a 7. |
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11/28/2005 03:31:42 AM |
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