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12/08/2005 05:00:57 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Technical : I like your use of DoF to force my attention. Looks like some of the voters thought it was "too much", but I think if you had done it any different it would change the importance of the objects.
Your focus is a little soft, if you didn't use Unsharp Mask filter, I recommend it, it will add just a touch of crispness to the photo that people like. Besides that, everything else looks good technically.
Artistic : I think you did excellent artisticlly. It's a unique idea, and well executed. About the only thing I can think of that would have improved this would be a more 'sideways' view of the toy. I think it would have more impact being able to see more of it's profile. Right now I just wish I could see more of it! =)
Challenge : You bullseyed this challenge. Well done!
Conclusion : You finished in the top 21%, not an easy feat, (I'll just ignore those two 95% finishes...) I don't think it will be long before we see you on the main page with a ribbon next to your name. Keep up the good work! |
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12/04/2005 10:09:24 PM |
| Not a strong tie to adulthood. With the focus on the toy truck it seems almost more a story about childhood and play. |
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12/04/2005 10:01:19 PM |
| Neat concept and shot. 8 for originality. |
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12/03/2005 09:12:00 PM |
| this is quite silly, and that's why I like it. perfect DOF. |
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12/03/2005 08:27:15 PM |
| cute.. nice idea and concept |
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12/01/2005 07:57:14 AM |
| Just too cute!! Very nice interpretation, good imagination. Love the blurred effect. |
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11/30/2005 11:02:52 PM |
| Amazing!! This should be in the top 10!! |
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11/30/2005 10:14:54 PM |
| -8 Made me laugh. Great concept! |
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11/29/2005 08:32:30 AM |
| Like the humerous angle-hehe |
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11/28/2005 09:44:34 PM |
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11/28/2005 05:45:55 PM |
| made me smile! cute composition...nice dof. |
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11/28/2005 02:43:32 PM |
| This photo is very funny, I love it. Very well composed and the DOF is perfect. |
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11/28/2005 02:14:08 PM |
| do you have the right competition ?? 3 |
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11/28/2005 01:50:33 PM |
| Great photo!! I work at CAT and love tractors... :) - 10 |
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11/28/2005 01:06:11 PM |
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11/28/2005 09:58:10 AM |
hehe + for humor there :D
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11/28/2005 04:45:07 AM |
| Cute idea, not sure you nailed it but I like the wry humour. Maybe some work on ODF would have helped. |
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11/28/2005 02:50:09 AM |
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11/28/2005 12:38:18 AM |
| I like DOF a lot but the rest of DPC SOMETIMES don't like it, nice shot 6 |
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