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Challenge: Self-Portrait Revisited (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S30
Location: stairwell
Date: Jun 17, 2003
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1
Date Uploaded: Jun 17, 2003

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Place: 169 out of 222
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Views since voting: 624
Votes: 276
Comments: 7
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06/25/2003 12:47:44 AM
Hello Michael, nice to meet you. This portrait doesn't make me feel that it's the kind Michael i know somewhat. Think the lighting has something to do with that.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/20/2003 09:17:01 PM
Feels like the hat is cut off too much, needs to be cropped higher.
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06/20/2003 12:30:07 AM
Whew, you really need to adjust the color (Levels) and the contrast in this shot. The railing in the background is a little distracting also.
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06/18/2003 09:25:51 PM
Hello,
Halfway up the stairs? Strange location. Makes me think, does this have any meaning? I not particularly fond of the yellow cast here. Maybe if your Camera has some kind of white balance to compensate for the type of lighting. I also would have like to have seen the highlighted part of your face a little brighter The cropping is good..
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06/18/2003 06:00:28 PM
I think a portrait should reveal some character, or emotion of the model, by showing expression in eyes or other facial features. Did your picture accomplish that? Yes, it sure did.

Lighting:pretty good....just a bit lighter or brighter would improve it.

Exposure:good

Focus:good

Creativity:the hat adds a little fun here.

Composition:good....eyes in the upper third

Background: Would be better without the bar to your right.
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06/18/2003 11:16:52 AM
change the background.. you should have choosed a wild one.. =) and try b/w
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06/18/2003 12:17:39 AM
Don't like the pipe in the background,5 from me!
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