This might have benefied by some sort of lighting...whether from and/or additional lamp on the outside or a flashligt on the inside. Right now, the lighting just isn't bringing out what it could.
I am particularly fond of the naturalness of this on all counts!
The use of black inside and thelight showing the actual pulp
are both most interesting. The marker was a tad distracting,
tho.
There is something missing...... hmmm...... wonder what it could be? Oh I get it - where is the candle? This thing is supposed to shine and glow!!! I do like the rest of the lighting, though.