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04/23/2004 10:15:32 PM |
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06/24/2003 10:20:25 PM |
| If only that light bulb didn't show above the screen in the back. This is a great shot. |
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06/22/2003 08:06:36 PM |
| I think I would have cropped this a little tighter, having the background be only the screen. Nice photo. Good luck. |
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06/21/2003 01:19:08 AM |
| It looks like this photo could have been very interesting, but it lacks form and shape, so its very hard to make out anything. The pincushion distortion and the appearance of it not being quite straight also detract as does the top edge of the shade, which would have looked better if it had of been trimmed out. You just would have needed to drop down a bit to get your hands in then |
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06/20/2003 11:38:56 PM |
| I can actually get some detail in the face if I turn my monitor up, was this supposed to be a silohette? It looks great as one. |
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06/20/2003 09:17:47 PM |
| Love the pose, would love to lose the lightbulb from the top but it would crop your hands out to do that. Maybe shoot from lower to fix that? |
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06/20/2003 03:55:03 PM |
| I like it a lot - the only thing that bothers me a little is the light bulb at the top. I think maybe it couldve been cropped out. still an 8. |
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06/20/2003 11:16:23 AM |
| A little hard to figure out which way you're facing and what position your body is in. Maybe that was part of the concept--sorry if so. Also, it might have been nicer if the bulb had been hidden by the screen... I do like the silhouette idea though. |
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06/20/2003 03:38:03 AM |
| lovely pose. i only wish the light at the top wasn't there. the diffuse light is very powerful...methinks you spend more than a little time doing yoga. |
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06/20/2003 12:11:10 AM |
| I can barely tell it's a person! |
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06/19/2003 12:33:30 PM |
| Nice concept and I like the format. However, I wish the bare light bulb at the top of the picture was hidden or cropped out completely and I wish the entire door was evenly lit throughtout. In addition, I find the sides not to add anything to the photo, so would have liked them cropped out too, unless light shed on them would have revealed something interesting to look at. Colors are too drab and would have liked some other kind of effect, even a small spot light on the face from the side or behind to add a more personal touch. |
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06/19/2003 04:50:04 AM |
| I think I would really like this photo alot more if the lightblub in the upper portion was not visible. |
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06/19/2003 02:54:38 AM |
| Nice attempt. Just two problems - 1. the section of the door breaks up the line of your back. 2. That light at the top is very distracting. |
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06/19/2003 12:34:41 AM |
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06/18/2003 08:44:58 PM |
| wonderfull silhouette. Maybe lower yourself a bit and crop our the lightbulb. Still a very callsy shot. Jacko. 8 |
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06/18/2003 05:13:10 PM |
An interesting shot - it's just a shame it wasn't lower down to avoid the harsh lightbulb. You could have crouched down so that your hands came lower than the screen, then the image could be cropped at the screen edge. Try obscuring the bulb - it looks so much easier on the eye and draws you in to the shape of your body without so many clues as to what you're looking at..
Message edited by author 2003-06-25 04:09:48. |
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06/18/2003 12:40:55 PM |
| great idea, nice silhuette photo. top mark! |
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06/18/2003 12:34:26 PM |
| I like it all except for the burning bulb at the top. Great background and idea for using your outline. |
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06/18/2003 11:21:01 AM |
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06/18/2003 11:11:06 AM |
I think a portrait should reveal some character, or emotion of the model, by showing expression in eyes or other facial features. Did your picture accomplish that? Not really.
Lighting:Fair
Exposure:fair
Focus:fair
Creativity:good
Composition:good
Background: good |
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06/18/2003 11:02:26 AM |
| watch out with the light.. =) |
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06/18/2003 11:02:21 AM |
| i actually don't like that you see the light bulb at the top. Maybe you should have taken it from a slighty different angle? |
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06/18/2003 04:03:19 AM |
| I think this image would have been better if you had moved the camera further back, moved it down, and zoomed in a little. THe barrel distortion (see the frame of the door) and the kight at the top are a little disturbing. For the setting and the pose alone, however, you are getting a 8 from me. Good work! |
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06/18/2003 01:15:16 AM |
| I like this a lot, I'd like it better if the light weren't peeking out over the top of the screen. 7 |
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