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Paper wave
Paper wave
aKiwi


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Delicate (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Location: Office desk. Munich Germany
Date: Oct 25, 2005
Aperture: 11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 4 Sec
Galleries: Abstract, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Oct 25, 2005

 I actually took this for the light on white, then changed my mind as I was submitting it. Hope others think it fits here too.
This is a stack of 10 sheets of paper stapled together in this form. I then made a background with a blue shape on a white background and put the paper up against the monitor so the blue shon through the paper. Turned the lights off and shot.

Post processing is.
Minor crop.
Minor levels.

Statistics
Place: 63 out of 279
Avg (all users): 5.6071
Avg (commenters): 7.6250
Avg (participants): 5.2442
Avg (non-participants): 5.7952
Views since voting: 1118
Views during voting: 345
Votes: 252
Comments: 9
Favorites: 3 (view)

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AuthorThread
 11/08/2005 04:29:25 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club:

Paper wave was your entry for the Delicate challenge, and I think you made the right choice moving this to Delicate instead of Light On White II.

Technical:
Excellent focusing and DOF. The lighting and cropping is superb. You have made good use of the maximum size allowed. The texture and shading of the paper against the white background works really well. I have just one comment of criticism and it is very minor. I wondered what the image would look like if the crop was not so tight at the top and showed the curve of the paper against the background.

Composition:
Superb! Nothing else I can say other than my last comment in technical about the crop.

Overall:
This would have creamed a Minimalism challenge. Judging by the scores I don't think a lot of voters really understood or took the time to study your image and so it scored far lower than it should have. It matches your other high scores but suffered unfairly during voting. A top 5 image, well done. I hope this brief critique is helpful and constructive. I would normally say more, but why should I? It is a winner in all but votes.

Steve
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/31/2005 01:19:21 PM
One more beatiful example of minimalism...8
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 10/30/2005 07:18:17 PM
beautiful work. well done.
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 10/30/2005 01:35:28 PM
Nice abstract. Fantastic colors.
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 10/29/2005 09:13:08 PM
Very creative shot - nice job.
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 10/28/2005 11:45:04 PM
nice job creating something interesting out of an everyday object. good colors.
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 10/28/2005 05:37:35 PM
Interesting and creative take on the challenge. I like the blue.
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 10/27/2005 03:02:01 PM
white and blue make a perfect color combination; very creative!
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 10/26/2005 10:15:21 PM
Very creative, Love the sharp lines here against the white background. The subtle change in hue is great from the bottom up, Wonderful picture.
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