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11/08/2005 12:08:55 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Akina...
I think this photograph offers a very interesting perspective on the concept of "delicate." I wish you had taken the opportunity to post your own thoughts on this image in the Photographer's Comments box when you submitted it. When you ask for in-depth critique and don't post any of your own thoughts, it can lead me to believe that you don't have much interest in the image yourself.
I believe this photo is under-rated. I also believe that it could be a little stronger at the same time. The theme of delicate is good. The flower looks like it is blooming out of a harsh environment struggling to survive against the odds. The little splash of color in the otherwise monochromatic environment also adds to this effect nicely. I believe there is a little too much unused space in the composition. A slightly tighter view could possibly strengthen the theme...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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10/30/2005 08:46:42 PM |
| Out-of-focus foreground is very distracting. I like the angle and the contrast of the red with the rest of the picture. Maybe would have decreased brightness of the highlights (sky) slightly. |
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10/30/2005 12:23:04 PM |
| Poor comp, hard to tell what subject is. |
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10/29/2005 07:57:02 PM |
| This is gorgeous! I love the color and the composition! |
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10/28/2005 01:52:06 PM |
| Certainly an interesting perspective, but beyond that it lacks the drama the title implies. |
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10/28/2005 01:30:38 PM |
| Great colors and angle. I love this photo. |
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10/28/2005 12:58:40 PM |
| Nice perspective. Love the color, it really pops out at you. |
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10/27/2005 11:46:19 PM |
| It's difficult to see the plant from this angle. A wider shot from above would have captured your title nicely. |
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10/27/2005 03:28:40 PM |
| very nice shot....love the angle |
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10/27/2005 06:13:16 AM |
| The bottom right corner is too "heavy" for me. |
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10/26/2005 04:02:26 PM |
| Great perspective shot and love the fact that the bloom is such a vivid color compared to the rest of the picture. |
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