This is excellent work with just one minor flaw at first glance. Since the Cathedral is your main focus point I feel as though you needed to avoid having those to lights with a starburst effect. It just distracts from the beauty of the building.
For the time of day you obviously did this photo your lighting is excellent and the focus is good.
I'm here trying to find other things I would change or do differently and there is nothing. This image is really nice with the exception of those two bursts of light.
As for meeting the challenge I feel you did that well too. The grain is there in your sky.
Excellent photo, but I'd like it more without the grain. I know, that's what the challenge calls for, but I just don't see how the grain helps photos like this one.
A beautiful shot. Where is the grain? compared to my favorites, this hardly has any. I'm not going to give you a terrible score, but it's gonna be neutral at best. The shot really is nice though.