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11/05/2005 10:39:02 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
For starters that pose just doesn't say delicate to me it says some other things but not delicate.
As others said your background is distracting go for a solid background or design the wallpaper there would have made a nice background but the door doesn't work with the wallpaper for a background.
You are a little off with the focus and it doesn't seem to be intentionally soft.
Your lighting here works.
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11/01/2005 04:22:27 PM |
| if you're going fo delicate, then have the model act delicate. this exudes a position of feminine power and seduction. focus is off or you forgot to sharpen for web viewing, need an even background, or one that adds to the message. |
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11/01/2005 02:28:36 PM |
| Interesting pose by the model. Good tight crop, maybe could be a little lower to include the thighs and elimate the empty space at top. Backgound is too busy and detracts from the subject. |
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11/01/2005 10:46:33 AM |
| doenst look delicate to me. |
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10/31/2005 03:13:19 PM |
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10/31/2005 12:00:46 PM |
shes hot, but for this challenge?
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10/31/2005 05:46:05 AM |
| While you have an incredibly attractive model here, not sure how delicate she is appearing and there are some focus/sharpness issues. |
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10/30/2005 10:48:03 AM |
| This is not a super-attractive pose, although the model does appear to have a nice figure. Black bra + white shirt does not convey delicate. This shot is out of focus and the background is distracting. There is something in the lower left side of the frame that looks like it was not cropped out as you intended. Overall, the model is pretty but this shot looks more like a personal snapshot than an artistic interpretation of "delicate." |
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10/29/2005 09:14:51 PM |
| Sensual, sexy but not very sharp. |
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10/29/2005 02:21:20 AM |
| She's lovely. I think your image could be sharper. Good luck. |
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10/28/2005 10:33:53 PM |
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10/28/2005 06:58:04 AM |
| I would have liked this shot more if your model had been in sharp focus. The two different colors in the background is distracting. |
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10/27/2005 04:19:58 PM |
| Sharpen up the picture and enter it into the Transparancy challenge for top results WINK. Very delicate though. :) |
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10/26/2005 11:56:41 PM |
| Your idea is good. Try to keep your subject in focus and maybe move the girl away from the door and against the white background to compose a better shot! |
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10/26/2005 02:49:52 PM |
| this picture is out of focus, and the background looks a bit dull as well.. |
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10/26/2005 02:47:15 PM |
| Image is a bit on the small side... |
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10/26/2005 01:34:16 AM |
| hot, but I need better focus 6 |
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10/26/2005 12:45:41 AM |
| Cute model, but out of focus, and the background is giving the photo a very amateurish look .. |
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