Cool idea which hasn't quite come off. The Classic Elements" label gets in the way of the message, that is after you really look hard and realise what the message is
Let me start off by saying that I like a lot of things you have going on but imho you should tweak a couple of things. I'm going to look at this as a commercial shot, perhaps unfairly. If this were my product, I would want all of the product name visible. I think if you rotated 45° and moved the product up about an inch, it would have shown , not only the whole name and an enticing description (Rich, Chocolate, etc.) but also you would have leading lines to the product name. The name would have been on a more horizontal plane and easier "access" to the consumer. I would like to see you take a little more risk. Risk is the difference between middle of the pack, and head of the pack. I'm looking forward to your next challenge.
wow, congratulations! 80 pounds has got to be worth a high score! I love how you showed the sizes on the garment so clearly and the object that helped you go from one to the other. 8
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