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Birthday
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Challenge: Greeting Cards (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Location: Brookfield, OH
Date: Sep 24, 2005
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/8
Date Uploaded: Sep 24, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 206 out of 211
Avg (all users): 3.4495
Avg (commenters): 2.5000
Avg (participants): 3.3300
Avg (non-participants): 3.5508
Views since voting: 845
Views during voting: 294
Votes: 218
Comments: 14
Favorites: 1 (view)


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/02/2005 06:29:21 PM
Just not in focus enough
10/02/2005 01:34:02 PM
This has a snapshot feel to it. The background is very ordinary and the overall focus seems too soft. No one in the frame is even smiling....
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/01/2005 01:27:12 PM
This is more of a snapshot. It meets the chalenge, but the focus and white balance are off
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09/29/2005 09:41:45 PM
this is a slightly shaky pic of Brigit's birthday party. It would not be a card I would choose to buy for someone.

Message edited by author 2005-10-05 06:07:37.
09/28/2005 10:47:44 AM
Nice picture but the exposure is a bit off. I wish I could see the full face of the girl on the right too.
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09/26/2005 06:58:39 PM
Humm... The picture looks like a snapshot. It doesn't appear that much thought went into it. It's also out of focus. However, I'm sure she had a great birthday. Keep on shooting.
09/26/2005 06:46:18 PM
The half there girl in the corner and the blurriness is very distracting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/26/2005 06:42:41 PM
I think this would be better if she was looking toward the cake or toward the camera. I also think the focus could be better and the color corrected.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/26/2005 03:14:37 PM
This is probably going to score really low...

Don't be discouraged. DPC is very harsh to blurriness and out of focus shots. The crop is a bit too tight.

However, for all the harsh criticisms I've received and low scoring entries. Realize, that a year of being on this site improved my photography by leaps and bounds. Enough so that numerous friends have commented on it. Including one friend who used to be a photographer commenting that I've improved quite a bit.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/26/2005 01:58:01 PM
I wish this were larger, and a sharper focus.
09/26/2005 09:37:39 AM
something has to be in focus for a greeting card to me
09/26/2005 06:50:30 AM
too small
09/26/2005 02:02:38 AM
I like this idea. Just a bit out of focus, and I think it needs better lighting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/26/2005 02:01:23 AM
blurry, overexposed, badly cropped and too small - good luck in the future!


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