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06/13/2003 07:25:42 PM |
*Critique Club*
Excellent focus and clarity. THIS is the amount of detail I love to see. I also see 'tripod' mentined in your comments, and this is a perfect example of WHY people should use one. Great clarity!
The angle and framing/cropping are ok, but maybe a little close on the right side.
Lighting is great. With the combination of great crispness, and good lighting, it really really brings out even the finest of the details here. I love how we can see how some of the little prongs are raised preparing to make some lovely music.
Definately portrays sound in my imagination. I think it fits the challenge perfectly.
Other than the crop on the right, I see nothing I'd like to have seen differently here.
~Heather~ |
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06/08/2003 10:45:44 PM |
| It's kind of subtle, but I can see a few of those prongs in movement. Perhaps a perspective closer to the prongs and lower would help us see their movement even more. |
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06/08/2003 10:03:51 PM |
| nice. :) Reminds me of the old player piano rolls. I haven't seen a music box like this since I was a kid. |
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06/08/2003 03:27:22 PM |
| Good composition - what's it playing? |
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06/02/2003 04:08:24 PM |
| Oh, neat. I had a very simple one of these as a kid, and I was always fascinated by how it worked, so to see a macro shot of the workings is very nostalgic for me. Which translates to "great choice of subject". |
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06/02/2003 03:03:38 PM |
| Nice angle, nice lighting. Definitely says sound. |
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06/02/2003 01:34:26 PM |
| I can almost hear it! Very nice - the angle seems a bit off - maybe not. 7 |
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06/02/2003 10:41:42 AM |
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06/02/2003 06:56:07 AM |
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