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eye spy .... a fractional self portrait
eye spy .... a fractional self portrait
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Challenge: Color Portrait (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5500 Zoom
Location: home
Date: Sep 11, 2005
Aperture: f2.9
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Sep 11, 2005

 being incredibly self critical this was the only peice of "I" left when I'd finished cropping.know it's not original or very good technically but I learned some more photoshop stuff while editing so not an entire waste of time.

Statistics
Place: 274 out of 284
Avg (all users): 3.8904
Avg (commenters): 4.0625
Avg (participants): 3.5108
Avg (non-participants): 4.2160
Views since voting: 936
Views during voting: 498
Votes: 301
Comments: 17
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/18/2005 11:24:37 PM
sorry but this is too bright and seems out of focus to me
 09/18/2005 07:42:00 PM
You may disagree with me, and that's okay, but this doesn't meet the spirit of the challenge in my opinion.
 09/17/2005 09:51:55 PM
Focus is a little soft for a close-up of the eye. I think you would do better with more DOF so the lashes aren't out. They are too vivid and prominent to leave out of focus. Also, while I like the off-center position of the shot, I think you're a little too far off.
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 09/17/2005 04:19:28 AM
Not sharp and the composition doesn't work. Why are you cutting off the right side? If you wanted to keep the iris away from the center maybe try looking off to the side?
 09/16/2005 08:27:00 PM
i think it would look cool if the only thing that outlined the eye was the eye lashes. maybe dodge out the skin parts.
 09/16/2005 04:30:00 PM
Not a classic portrait, but still a great picture
Good luck
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/15/2005 08:49:32 AM
Seems slightly overexposed (bright) to me, but I like the concept.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/14/2005 05:30:21 AM
I thought of trying this but never got around to doing so. Good thinking.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/13/2005 10:55:57 PM
Wow the doorway is amazing.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/13/2005 12:13:14 PM
nice eye.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/13/2005 09:37:39 AM
imo, this is a very risky entry. people might be expecting facial or whole portraits. but the capture is nicely done.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/12/2005 05:43:50 PM
Too much reflection in the iris
 09/12/2005 02:50:13 PM
a bit too much eye for a portrait, to me
 09/12/2005 01:18:40 PM
Very good photo, but didn't feel it was in the spirit of the challenge. Felt like it would be unfare to others to give the score it probably deserved IMO.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/12/2005 11:55:33 AM
Bit oversharpened for my tastes. Nice colors in the eye itself though!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 09/12/2005 04:55:36 AM
Reflection in the eye distracts. Seems a bit over exposed. Sharper focus would help.
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 09/12/2005 01:43:10 AM
Wishing it were a little sharper- props for creativity though! :) I like that outside the box thing you got going on.
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