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I agree about working on the pose itself. The lighting looks pretty good, but seeing someone's underarm is not necessarily very appealing to a lot of people. Yes, it can be inconsequential, but not when you can see razor stubble. Not trying to be harsh here at all, just letting you know my first reactions. When you're shooting with models (and please understand I am NOT good at capturing people) I've always thought that you need to capitalize on their best features or capture pure emotion. I'm not sure this particular pose does either. I think your model is quite attractive and has some wonderful qualities that you might consider concentrating on more (and some less). For example, I think she has great eyes (although the makeup from this angle looks a bit overdone), a nice smile (although the crooked front teeth would be less noticeable from another angle), great hair (but the lighting on the top is a little harsh), and beautiful skin (although, as I said the whole underarm thing). Just my 2 cents... |
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