I really thought this was creative and great out-of-the-box thinking. I scored it a 6. Would have scored it much higher if it didn't have the pink tint to the sheet(milk) and border. Great job though.
First. I don't like the border but that's just me. Your WB is off I think you should have made correction to the colors. And a bit more contrast would have helped alot.
such sheeting action... oh wait - that's a sheet. Fudge factor aside, I like the idea, but there's a bit of pink tint overall that really doesn't help the shot - unless it's strawberry milk.
I really like the Idea here. but I would have to say that something about the way it was done leaves a little to be desired. I wonder if you could have used macro and shallow depth of field to some effect with the idea of using a sheet.
I'm sure others will comment on the rest of the issues, such as the lighting on the black curtain and the red cast on the white sheet.
Well done on actually doing something and entering it, which is better than I could say for myself.