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08/28/2005 03:15:55 PM |
| I really really like the pose, angle etc., but the image suffers from overexposed highlights. Maybe a liitle less contrast. Good work. |
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08/28/2005 02:51:45 PM |
| I think the flower helps balance the composition well. I think I would like the skin tones a little darker to add more shadow and tone range. |
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08/28/2005 01:33:28 PM |
| certainly see the desperation, but what is the flower for? |
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08/27/2005 11:27:42 PM |
| I'm not sure I understand how a sunflower illustrates despair. |
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08/27/2005 04:26:08 PM |
| Love the high key look and the composition is great. |
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08/27/2005 12:31:57 AM |
Great pose, but your lighting being so direct and in line with the camera makes the shot appear flat. Not sure the flower adds to the composition. Nice work
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08/26/2005 12:08:00 AM |
| I like the twisted pose and the lowered head and the light treatment generally. I mourn the loss of detail in her shoulder and hand. |
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08/25/2005 11:32:18 PM |
| Seems a little bright. But I like the look of this shot. |
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08/24/2005 09:13:45 AM |
| bumping up, actually a lot more to see if you look for it. that's why I come back up to 3-4 times. |
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08/24/2005 07:28:13 AM |
Nice image.
Shouldn't the petals be lying all over the ground with one left on the flower? Just an idea I had.
I think the top left & right cropping is OK, but somehow the cropped foot is wrong. |
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08/24/2005 02:56:55 AM |
| Nice lighting, vision, would have like it better with her foot all the way in photo and possibly a different flower would have made it more aluring and dramatic at the same time. still nice shot. |
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08/23/2005 11:06:18 PM |
| High contrast seems to detract from the intended mood in this shot. Creative pose. |
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08/23/2005 09:28:05 PM |
| I like the crop, having a lot of the sides of the model clipped adds an interesting dimension to the photo. The lighting is good. IThe skin is a little blown out in some spots but that adds to the contrast between the model and the black background, it works well. Good dof and focus, I like the crispness of the hair. The white fleck in front of the knee, once noticed, is distracting (sorry to nit pick). Very nice capture. |
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08/23/2005 08:28:04 PM |
| Nice black and white photo. For me the highlights are a bit too bright, but very well done. |
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08/23/2005 05:05:36 PM |
| Interesting and well done composition. Tones well done for subject. Crop good. Lighting slightly harsh but works for the most part. POV and DOF great. 6 - good luck in the challenge! |
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08/23/2005 11:13:50 AM |
| seems a lil overexposed... but great though |
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08/22/2005 11:42:03 PM |
| Outstanding Angle and great use of Lines |
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08/22/2005 11:19:29 PM |
| Nicely done. IMHO the highlights on the fingers and shoulders are a bit blownout. 8 |
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08/22/2005 10:47:38 PM |
| Very powerful pose, the light may be a bit harsh on her shoulder, but that may have been intentional for you. Because of the title, I'm confused about the flower, it's a bit outside of the challenge, and is distracting . It does fill a void nicely however. |
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08/22/2005 09:24:49 PM |
| I am not to fond of this crop. I think maybe too much was cropped out. I like the flower, If this is a self portrait, I admire you for submitting. Good luck. |
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08/22/2005 08:30:24 PM |
| Overall great shot. I feel sorry for her heart being broken, you can see her pain in this photo. Bravo! |
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08/22/2005 06:40:57 PM |
| Beautiful composition and well executed. Very nice b/w work |
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08/22/2005 05:30:03 PM |
| Good pose, and well framed. I really like overexposure when it is done right. I think you got it. |
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08/22/2005 03:06:28 PM |
| I love the pose... the fabric is somewhat distracting from the image. The highlights appear a bit blown too. |
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08/22/2005 02:40:23 PM |
| The flower compliments the theme of the image, as does the pose. The lighting is a little too harsh, it has blown out details that in an image like this could have given a darker more mournful effect. |
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08/22/2005 12:43:05 PM |
| I find the flower a non-essential to the feel of the shot. It's almost a distraction as it's more in focus than part of the woman's body. The lighting is a tad too harsh for my taste. I hope you find this helpful. |
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08/22/2005 04:20:20 AM |
| Really like this shot - nice pose - title fits nicely too. |
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08/22/2005 01:34:20 AM |
| the lighting seems a bit too harsh in some spots. otherwise it is a very good pose and a nice shot. |
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08/22/2005 01:09:21 AM |
| Title doesn't seem to fit and the crop is very tight. Otherwise good lighting and tones. |
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