Chip! I LOVED this picture so much. I was of your three 10's! I'm so surprised and disappointed that it isn't way at the top where it belongs. Now, I'm really anxious to see more of your work. I love your style :)
Nice attempt, but I think it lost something in the translation. You've got good movement and perspective. The colors are a bit washed out (no pun intended) and the crop is a bit too tight IMHO. Still, a pretty good shot.
I think this lacks a sense of drama, which might have been usefully increased with some contrast work, especially around that spray of water, which simply shades into greyness.
I like the action, and the way this shot reminds me of how much I enjoy zooming through deep puddles. Pedestrians beware! The only way I can think of improving this shot would be to wait for a more interesting vehicle to make a splash, probably not possible, though.