Good subject, a lot of character in those window panes. I think the composition could have been better by panning up & right a bit, maybe shooting from a lower or higher angle, rather than from horizontal. Lots of different ways to shoot this. Godd find.
I like the textures at play here, but I think the White vertical bar is too centered and the shot is not quite straight enough to be really static, but not at enough of an angle to by dynamic.
The lighting is flat, and I just can't find anything interesting with this photograph. Perhaps a different angle, perhaps getting closer, definitely different lighting would help a bit.