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08/27/2005 09:44:14 PM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
Good DOF and focus. Exposure levels seem to be right on. I really like the "stormy feeling" that the black-on-black creates, but the expression on the models face just does not convey the same feeling.
The composition would have been perfect had the fingers not been cropped off. Still, a really nice shot!
- Linda |
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08/22/2005 01:39:47 AM |
| You got robbed. I found this shot much better than in the hundreds place. The whole mood works and I like the smeared makeup with the dark clothes and background. All well. Better luck next time! |
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08/19/2005 08:10:43 PM |
| Very creative interpretation of personifying an image of rain. The grayish cast to her face makes her appear very stormy. I would say that especially as a work of fine art, you did a wonderful job. The one thing I didn't like was her smile. I would have probably just taken the shot without a smile. Takes away from the idea of stormy. |
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08/19/2005 04:21:09 PM |
Gives the impresion of been caught in the rain
I love the care free expression on the models face
Not sure I like the background so much but more good things than bad here |
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08/19/2005 08:08:32 AM |
| I like the expression you've caught, feels carefree to me, nice emotive shot. |
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08/18/2005 07:11:31 PM |
Almost surreal.
Her skin tones look really bizarre to me |
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08/18/2005 04:49:51 PM |
| My first impression of this shot was that I didn't like it. Then I looked at it again and studied it. I've now come back to it 4 times. Each time I bump it up another notch. Once again, I find myself doing the same. Very emotive and "colorful" shot. I love the blacks and textures. 8 |
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08/18/2005 02:55:07 AM |
love the low-key darkness of this image. her positioning, however, is a bit akward. it might be her hand, or facial expression...i don't really know. i think it would have appealed more to me if you cropped out her hand entirely.
but all in all, a very cool image. good luck :-) |
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08/17/2005 11:13:50 AM |
| Nice imagery, although the black on black effect of the clothes & background gives it a heavy or dark feel. It would also help to actually see rain instead of just wet. |
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08/15/2005 10:30:28 AM |
| Fingers chopped off by edge of frame... this is rarely effective. |
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08/15/2005 08:20:16 AM |
| i like it, its really nice, you got the right skin tone, and the frame is amazing |
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08/15/2005 12:53:18 AM |
| very cool! I like the darkness of it and the messed up make-up! |
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08/15/2005 12:41:15 AM |
| Interesting. I guess her make up smudged in the rain??? Nice contrast and desat.The black on black works here. |
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