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05/23/2003 03:54:38 PM |
*Critique Club*
Good one.
I like the depth in this. While it isn't hugely deep, what depth it does have is really strong. The lines are really nice and defined.
Most of them anyway. I see that the lines which go off into the upper right, and lower left, are not repeated in the upper left and lower right. See what I mean? Those 2 corners kind of just blend in and don't have the lines that create the detph in the rest of the shot.
I do like where you have positioned the center circle of the tupperware. It's off center enough to be 'dramatic' and not look like an error, yet in the frame enough to still show the upper right portion of the object.
Focus and clarity are good. The logo is easily recognisable and easily readable.
The color is excellent and difinately fits into the challenge. It is a nice, brightly colored orange, with a nice pattern to it.
I really can't see anything that I would like to see differenly other than maybe some extra detail in the U/L and L/R corners.
What a fun shot.
~Heather~ |
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05/21/2003 12:35:19 AM |
| This is a very creative shot which should have done better IMO. |
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05/20/2003 01:45:46 PM |
| The texure is nice in this photo. |
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05/19/2003 11:38:48 PM |
| good lighting and texture... great focus and placement of the subject.. however subjectively the shot leaves me wanting something more |
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05/19/2003 10:27:50 AM |
| very nice, if you move it really fast up and down on you screen it kinda makes you dizzy. |
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05/18/2003 08:05:34 PM |
| nice idea..good clear image |
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05/18/2003 07:45:51 AM |
| Great job. take away the tupperware and you have a very nice abstract shot. I love the lines. Jacko. 8 |
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05/18/2003 12:18:10 AM |
| Cool abstract...... gives off kinda a retro vibe...... nice play of shadows... |
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05/16/2003 02:39:19 PM |
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05/16/2003 11:03:31 AM |
| I really like this - it reminds me of the sun motifs which were common on front doors - I think in the 1930s or 1940s. I remember studying them at school - briefly, as part of some other subject. The tupperware registered trademark ties in with that era too. The colour is wonderful and I love the dark and light shadows. I'd like to crop this a little so that the "sun" was positioned on a vertical and horizonal thirds intersection point. |
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05/15/2003 05:13:08 PM |
| You made something quite boring look interesting. 7 |
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05/15/2003 09:32:04 AM |
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05/14/2003 10:46:28 PM |
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05/14/2003 02:23:15 PM |
| Very nice idea. I like the lighting for the image, as well as the patterns and texture that the image provides. Good job. |
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05/14/2003 02:06:40 PM |
| nice, i like the texture found in this image, good work 5 |
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05/14/2003 07:51:18 AM |
| beautiful. should have called it plastic sunrise or something :) |
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05/14/2003 02:18:14 AM |
| Off center and does appear to follow the thirds rule. It would have been nice to have it more off center and maybe lighting change. 4 |
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05/14/2003 01:33:29 AM |
| I like your subject, that you chose to photograph something that we see all the time but never really notice. Gives it more importance the way you've cropped it. |
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05/14/2003 12:21:48 AM |
| Could use a little bit more interest, but definatley orange. |
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