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05/26/2003 02:35:57 AM |
*Critique Club*
I really like this. This is a really great nicely set up shot. The feel is fun, neat, and lively.
I think that if I HAD to chose something that could use work, it would be that I wish that some of the purple feathers didn't seem so dark. There was the suggestion of some extra lighting on them, which could work.
I think that a darker background is a bad idea, because the feathers on top are already dark, and the dark background would make this blend in too well, and make it a mushy mess. lol
The focus and clarity are good. I like the detail in the mask, and the sequins and ribbon are nice and crisp. Detail is simply great.
I like the angle and framing/cropping as well. The centered subject here is alright due to the angle of the mask. This creates the dramatic angle that I believe keeps it from being "too centered". Had the mask been straight, I think that would be boring and too centered, however, just that slight tilt was enough to make a world of difference.
Lighting is perfect. I like the little flecks of light on the ribbon and forhead ornament, and I like the shadows created by the mask, and ribbon.
Put this all together, and you have a really excellent image. And you do! I could see this on the front of a birthday card, or party invitation. As is, no changes. It's great.
Congrats on a job WELL done.
~Heather~ |
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05/23/2003 12:54:28 AM |
Good Work... It burns me up though when 10 people feel this is inferior work. This is good and did not deserve any 1, 2, or 3 marks. Keep up the good work and good luck on the upcoming challenges.
Bob
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05/20/2003 09:10:36 PM |
| Beautiful colors, excellent subject. I REALLY like the details and the feel of this. It looks just randomly discarded. Excellent background choice as well. I can think of 5 total shots that are top 3 material - this is one of them! good luck! |
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05/19/2003 10:59:48 PM |
| Nicely done. Love the colors. The textures are really good. However, I wish it wasn't so centered. Overall, good job. 7 =-) |
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05/19/2003 10:42:21 PM |
| Looks fun! Can I join? :-) Nice composition. Purple feathers seem a tad dark resulting in lost details, but that could be the monitor I'm using now. Will have to take another look from home later. |
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05/18/2003 10:04:51 PM |
| wow! very colorful and crisp. Nice job at adding the beads. Good luck. Jacko. 9 |
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05/18/2003 04:22:20 PM |
| Wonderful image. 9 Morgan |
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05/17/2003 01:33:28 PM |
| Great photo...it really captures the festiveness and gaity of Mardi Gras. I love the extras you added to accomplish this, such as, the streamers on the sides and the sequence scattered about, all done very aesthetically. I also like the soft shadows. Only thing I would like to have seen, is a spot light on the feathers, or maybe some fill flash to illuminate the top feathers a bit better. |
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05/16/2003 10:34:46 PM |
| Excellently composed. The shadows in the "eyes" make it look alive. |
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05/15/2003 11:38:16 PM |
| Nice color, sharpness, and idea. |
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05/15/2003 11:26:11 PM |
| Simple, fun, effective. Even though it is a set up shot with limited props, it does say Mardi Gras. Nice vibrant colors, those silks and glitters help. Good composition. 8 |
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05/15/2003 09:56:01 PM |
| Perfect subject, love it. I'm not sure about the white background, though, maybe something darker. A lovely 9. |
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05/15/2003 03:18:56 PM |
| I was waiting to see if anyone would do anything Mardi Gras related! Purple Orange/Gold & Green are great secondary colors.. so festive.. I even like the flash off the ribbon! 10! |
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05/15/2003 10:41:04 AM |
| Good idea, I like the way you have set this up. The colors work well together - 9. |
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05/15/2003 07:49:06 AM |
| The most creative use of secondary colours in this challenge. I like the placement of the scattered beads. 10 |
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05/14/2003 10:38:00 PM |
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05/14/2003 10:43:27 AM |
| Yeah, nice light, good composition and colors. |
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