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05/20/2003 12:53:48 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Geocide...
I think this is the beginning of a pretty strong abstract... I think your compositional choices on this photo are pretty good, but there may be a bit of room for suggestion here... I don't know how many different compositions you tried, but I'm thinking that a little rotation on the 'object' could create some more strength in the image. I think a slight rotation would create some diagonal strength in the lines of the image...
I like the starkness of the exposure here also. The high key creates a lot of good contrast and sets an interesting overall mood for the shot.
Excellent work...
John Setzler
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05/13/2003 01:08:44 PM |
| I think lowering the subject in the frame would have added much more interest to the overall shot. |
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05/12/2003 08:14:07 PM |
| a different color in the background i think would have brought a lot more intrest to your picture. Nice Work though. |
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05/10/2003 04:33:15 PM |
You're right. It looks simple, but what is it :) Interesting. Jacko. 7
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05/09/2003 06:55:03 PM |
| I think this represents good technical photography skills, however the photo isn't very interesting. |
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05/08/2003 03:35:27 AM |
| ... and effective. The object looks quite solid, but I think the white space below makes it seem to float in space. |
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05/07/2003 11:02:25 AM |
| too bad about the shadows...I really like the image. better lighting would lessen the need to brighten this and delineate your subject better. good job. |
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