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07/29/2005 01:00:47 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
Composition is executed very well here as the roof lines lead my eye straight to the bird. Looks to be just a tad over sharpened. I like the framing you chose also. It really compliments the birds colors.
The sky is your biggest enemy in this shot as it lacks color. Cropping closer would have hurt the composition though. Not much you could do with basic editing - but for your own private use/print I would try to add some color to the sky.
- Linda |
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07/20/2005 04:34:54 PM |
| nice bird, but the white background is too stark for me |
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07/20/2005 07:18:41 AM |
| Good capture against the sky. Shame the sky had no drama in it, it weakens the pic. A centred composition is not always best |
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07/19/2005 01:56:51 PM |
| oversharpened sky bland good capture |
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07/18/2005 10:35:24 AM |
| Man, that is one ugly bird... :) |
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07/17/2005 05:04:41 PM |
| Very nice detail of the feathers. I love the color of them. The green blue roof really enhances their color. The sky is uninteresting though and I would have probably tried cropping more of it out. |
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07/17/2005 08:10:39 AM |
| A little too saturated for my eye. Otherwise, a bold image. |
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07/17/2005 01:19:23 AM |
| looks a little over sharpened plus the sky has very little color. Would have liked to see the sky contrast against the bird more. |
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07/17/2005 01:15:05 AM |
| I hate vultures but this is really good. THe turquoise of the tin roof is a perfect contrast to his red head. The peak leads your eye up. I wish the sky were a tad more colored. Even gray would be nice. His feather detail is well done. |
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07/17/2005 12:10:45 AM |
| uh oh - border patrol isnt going to like that red border...Great bird though. |
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