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Wash your feet.
Wash your feet.
jseyerle


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Family (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/4.0L USM
Location: Wandsworth Park - London
Date: Jul 10, 2005
Aperture: F19
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/50sec
Galleries: Animals
Date Uploaded: Jul 10, 2005

 Taken in the park.
I don't have a family myself so found it difficult to relate to this one ;) so I decided animals have better grasp of family than I do so I went for the swans.

I tried to focus on composition here. I have the classis "S" and i felt my DOF was good as well.

Not a ribbon winner. Was going more for comments of the composition and DOF.

My other idea was a his and her razor and shaving cream ;)

Statistics
Place: 128 out of 159
Avg (all users): 4.7625
Avg (commenters): 4.8000
Avg (participants): 4.4750
Avg (non-participants): 4.9063
Views since voting: 688
Views during voting: 343
Votes: 240
Comments: 12
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 07/18/2005 10:57:05 AM
Well. . . I for one, always give an emotional edge to duck pictures. I liked this one a lot and am really surprised that it did not score higher! It very much looks like a nurturing family, and I just love your sepia tones. I think you did a great job on this!!!!

 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/15/2005 04:35:22 PM
There are too many super bright blown out areas on the photo. The cropping is too tight everywhere.
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 07/13/2005 11:56:03 PM
Compositionally, the lines on the adult lead you straight into the center of the photo which is a slightly OOF neck which curves and leads you back to the adult. The concept is wonderful.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/12/2005 11:04:52 PM
Subject Impact: High
Meets Challenge: Average
Technical: Low
Composition: Average
Creativity: Average

Score: 5
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 07/12/2005 09:28:16 PM
The lighting feels a bit too harsh for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/12/2005 03:10:44 PM
A bit washed out in the background, but shooting water can be hard. That aside, Its a good pic!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/12/2005 01:24:31 PM
confusing whose neck goes to who , she does look like a typical critical mom though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/12/2005 09:51:00 AM
Nice crop. Sort of wish I could see more of the chicks' "faces"
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/11/2005 08:06:26 PM
awesome.. the shorpness, colors and yet so soft and warm. very prety.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/11/2005 09:36:47 AM
A lovely idea, but the shoot is OOF. At this distance it should be much clearer and cleaner. Did you use a tripod? It looks like camera movement causing the blur.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/11/2005 09:12:24 AM
This is a bit busy. I had to study it to figure out that those were goslings. But once I got that and read the title - I got a bit of a chuckle. The water is a tad harsh and detracts from the nice tones of the birds. I wish the babies necks and faces weren't so dark.
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 07/11/2005 03:12:11 AM
the background is all "washed out" making this less asthetic as it could be.
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